Raven Story Part 7

~~~Facts~~~
-Click the “I Like” button
-Cheese=Curse
-Click the “I Like” button
-I don’t like this chapter either
-Click the “I Like” button
-Thow that controls cheese controls the world
-Click the “I Like” button

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Traveling to my next period was a breeze; thankfully Jason was in my 2nd period too. When we got to the next field we noticed we were the first ones there so we took a seat on the earthy. We discussed various things (mostly video games >_>).
“Hey, have you played that new online game called Elpam Story, it’s pretty addiction but it’s hard to level and full of hackers,” Jason said.
“I bet it one of those pointless RPG games,” I replied.
“Yea, but it 2D and its side-scrolling online game.”
“Lemme guess, a warrior, thief, mage, and bowman.”
“Uhhh.”
“Thought so.” The bell rang and everyone took their seats on the sandy floor. Also on cue the teacher arrived. He was a tall and thin man wearing a black overcoat and had thick square glasses.
“I am Dr. Sayus, I will be your new strength teacher for this quarter,” Dr. Sayus said calmly.
“You’re kidding right?” Jason asked eyeing the teacher’s attire and physical appearance.
“Ohh,” the teacher replied. Dr. Sayus then took out a black square like weight.
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/ =actual size

“Catch,” Dr Sayus said throwing the weight at Jason. Jason extended out his hand.
“Meh, piece of –“Jason was interrupted by an ear-piercing ground-breaking sound. There was a slight earthquake.
“WHAT THE CHEESE!” Jason screamed using both hands to try and carry that little weight. His face grew bright red and veins were popping out of his head. His sweat was dripping down to the floor below him.
“I CAN’T HOLD IT!” Jason exclaimed letting go of the weight and rolling to the side. A wave of dust exploded into the air. When the dust lifted the weight lay in the center of a large earth-like crater. A wave of gasps and astonishment flew over the crowd.
“At the end of the quarter, each of you should be able to do this,” Dr. Sayus said breaking the silence. Another wave of gasps followed. Dr. Sayus, with one hand, was able to hold 6 of those exact same weights and each of his fingers and 1 in the center of his palm. He threw all 6 weights in the air and caught them all in his other hand without even flinching.
“Not 1 student has ever been unable to do this with my training,” Dr. Sayus declared. Jason was still panting breathlessly on the floor. We exchanged looks and got a familiar message, this was not going to be an easy year.

~~~~~Far far Away~~~~~
“Wait until he’s isolated,” a thief wearing black on top a tall tree said.
“Rew that can take for hours” the 2nd thief said.
“Unga, that teacher is no ordinary teacher, he could see our ilbis coming within at least a 5 yard radius, and he’s always around his friends,” Rew said.
“But we must strike when he’s out in the open,” Unga complained.
“Patience Unga, Melvin was impatient and he suffered the consequences, we strike when the time is right.”

10 thoughts on “Raven Story Part 7”

  1. Yay! I have dialogue! Thank you!
    By the way, I love the story! I’m guessing “Elpam” = “Maple” backwards, am I right?

  2. i like Eplam story lol!

    make more! and don’t worry if not too many people like ur series (or if u make money -_-“) i’ll still like it =D

  3. weelll, seems like everyone like elpam story, lol, so that was a great hit, and ways, umm, yeah, umm, o! HOW COME MY NAME WASN”T USED? i came out though, lol

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