Sinek’s Story (part 2)

Those of you that gave helpful tips and told me what i didn’t do well, I will try to listen to your advice.
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Chapter 3: The Tournament
The sun rose and lit the mountains of Perion. The mountains gleamed in the sunlight. Sinek hasted himself and ran through the dried up plants. He jumped onto the side of the mountains and threw two steelies at a copper drake. He killed every drake in the valley. Covered in blood, Sinek walked past Snow and onto the edge of a cliff. He sat down to rest and seemed lost in thought.
“He really scares me when he’s like this,” thought Snow, “I wonder if thats his blood or another monster massacre.”
The silence was broken by a megaphone.”The Maple Tournament will begin in one week! The prize for this years tournament is Ten Million Mesoes and the equipment set of your choice! Registration and more details will be at Lith.”
The two traveled to lith and saw a giant mob of people. “I guess we found registration,” said Snow.
There wasn’t a noticable line so they went striaght to sign the registration forms. “Hmm, that’s strange,” said Snow, “This is two on two battles, and this isn’t hosted by the usual tournament hosts. It also says that whoever hosted this event will not be held responsible for any injuries and deaths.”
“So they don’t plan on stopping these matches when there is an obvious winner,” said Sinek, ” Its a fight to the death. I can handle that.”
A thief came up to them. He seemed to be pretty experianced. He wore a scorpio set and a scarab. Sinek noticed sets of ilbi in his pocket. “You are the first to realize that. The rest of these fools haven’t figured that out yet. They may not until its too late. There are mercinaries in this tournament. Aparently, the host of this tournament wants bloodshed.”
“Why are you telling us this? Who are you anway?” asked Snow.
After a quick introduction, they learned that the thief was named Gate. He was entering the tournament with a warrior named Kai. “If you know all this,” asked Sinek, “Then why are you entering?”
“For the prize of course. Why else?” iquired Gate.
“I fight to become the best. The strong are here, and I’m going to beat all of them,” ranted Sinek.
Gate laughed,”I guess I’ll see you and Snow at the final rounds then.”
Just then the megaphone announced, “Registration will soon come to an end. All who have not registrated must hurry to the registration booth.”
The following week was filled with intense training by all. The day had finally come. The tournament was about to begin!
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Ran out of time. >.<
Feel free to criticize(except about being short i know that already) it only makes me better
…I think