An Idea For My Story and the Prologue

First of all this isn’t my idea, I got it from some books I read, so don’t flame me ><

This is basically a story but instead of just reading the whole thing through there are options along the way that you can choose. So each choice you make leads you to a different story and endings. Once you make a choice you are told where in the blog to read next.

So do you think this is good idea for my story or should I just keep it the old fashion way?

And now on to my story…

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The Lost City

Before the humans roamed the Earth, there was a lone city. It was inhabited by a race of monsters not seen for millions of years. They were of superior intelligence and could morph into any shape or form so their true identity was never shown. The city was advanced even compared to our modern civilization. The path to the city was hidden deep within the dungeon now in the middle of the four cities in Victoria Island. When the first humans, the Elders, came to Earth they discovered this lost city. The entrance was heavily armored by magic and stone.

But with the powers of the Elders they were able to break apart the doors and enter the city. The shape shifters felt their presence and ambushed them. The Elders were able to fight them off but not for long. They backed away towards the exit and fled the city, sealing the entrance.

Until one day when the doors were once again opened…

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So do you like the idea for the story? If so I’ll write more.

And I forgot to add it at first the but the name of the story is ‘The Lost City’.

7 thoughts on “An Idea For My Story and the Prologue”

  1. I like it!

    But I don’t think the choose-your-own-adventure (that’s what my 5th grade teacher called it o.O) format would work too well. Just do it the old fashioned way.

  2. lmao, its very interesting but i dont ike choose your own story cause it gets stupid after a while, plus it seems like too much work for you, and the idea of another way to complete the story just makes it confusing and stupid. no alternate realities plz.

  3. Old fashioned way rules! Stick with it. I like the story,but it’s a little fast. You could’ve described the battle more though.

    -Dark

  4. ooo I like it. That’s a good spot to leave the readers hanging. Gah! i wanna know what happens next!

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