ruler of the world part 2

fatherpimp:i am highly impressed with u tom or rather thomas u made excellent progress and u have trained alot latelyi think u r ready for the test to bcome1 of the higher rankings in my army.
Thomas:really sir? ty i cant beileve my own training either.
Fatherpimp:ofcourse there is much to learn now quick get the army ralleyed today we finally strink our target ellina.
Thomas:yes sir!
in ellina later that day.
Fatherpimp:u fools i told u to join me now u all shall perish be neith me and my army Muhahahahahahaha.
Thomas:sir we got the prsoners.
Fatherpimp:kill them all they dont deserve to live.
thomas:but sir r u sure i mean they are innocent bystanderds passing through and
fatherpimp cuts him off.
fatherpimp:r u questioning me bcuz u no wat happens wyhen u do.
Tom:no sir i shall do as u say sir.
fatherpimp notices the old wizard runnung and lets him go noing that now is not the time to kill him.
army:sir we have the town under our control wat now???
fatherpimp:well we will wait and see then we will hit our next target.
army:wat is that sir
fatherpimp:when time comes i shall tell.
thomas:sir wat is our next target???
fatherpimp:well i have decided the best 1 shall b henesys the littlw weak town shall pay for its ignorance.
thomas:ok sir wat shall i do until then?????
fatherpimp:take our good men and head out to perion to get some more men and find out wat the best attack plan shall b to take henesys.
thomas:ok sir.

For those of u wanting to no tom and thomas are the same and this story is a little piece i am throwing together so i hope u like it anyways please blog,pmor leave commint.Message me if u want to help on third and ty for looking at.

One thought on “ruler of the world part 2”

  1. I didn’t try to read this due to the fact(s):

    A. Spelling, Spelling, SPELLING
    B. Spacing, Please, *groans*
    C. And length. You need more of it.

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