Heres the next paragraph.
His name was Mark and he was 17 and his sister was 5 like Crash, her name was Michelle and she had brown hair and brown eyes. He had golden brown hair and deep blue eyes that were easy to get lost in. He had a firm big strong body posture and looked really good in what he was wearing. He was a warrior of course from all those muscles. And I knew from the moment I saw him he must have a girlfriend so I didnt bother getting to close to him.
Just as a note you’re supposed to have more than 1 paragraph per chapter. >_>
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Read the thingy before. . .
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