Wassup everyone? Everyone doing ok this past week or so? Anwayz this is my first series… Hope you guys like it
It all started on a normal day. Everyone would be in Ludi PQing and defeating Alishar. Little did they know that each time they fought him, he became stronger and more experienced. It all started here, in the land of Ludi. When people were pqing, sometimes they died, but for some reason they wouldn’t come back alive normally. People’s files were lost never to return. They noticed that this only happened while they were pqing. So they got suspicious.
Alishar figured out a way using his dark magic to allow monsters to travel outside their original maps. Also, he figured our a way to make humans die forever, never allowing them to come back into the game. He locked the Login Page as well, so we were trapped.
This is where my guild and I (not telling name of guild for confidential reason) were very strong indeed. It was mostly my friends and I in it. I was a priest, my friends Rhawnie (Dragon Knight), Jesse (Cheif Bandit), Dillon (Ice Mage), Jericah(White Knight), Alex (Fire Mage), Christian (Sniper), and Rudy (Hermit) were all very close friends of mine. But, there is a secret romance in our circle of friends, and it can lead to corruption and the world’s destruction.
Alishar came out of PQ and devastated Ludi. He went to the Klock Ghost Civilizaton in The Path of Time and persuaded them to join his army. With the Dark Klocks leading the way, they pushed human out of Ludi. It was devastating. NPC’s were dropping like flies and humans had to wait 15 minute periods to get on the train. Until then they had to wait. My guild were in Ludi.
“Run guys!” I said trying to get everybody on the ship before the monsters came. BOOM! They had blown up the barricade keeping them out.
“Dillon freeze them!” Rudy yelled. Before i could turn around, there was ice flying everywhere. There, right in front of my face, was a Dark Klock, almost ready to rip me up to shreds.
“Thanks Dillon” I said gratefully. But i spoke too soon. More monsters were on the way. Everybody was on the ship. We were on our way to Orbis. But, we couldnt relax, because we knew the monsters were right on our tail and if they could get to El Nath, they would unleash Zakum, a boss we have kept locked up in the Cave for so long…
HEY! Nice to meet you See my story > Also you have nice description But I think you shouldent just say someone’s name and then put like (Cb) since then it sorta takes away the magic, try to , describe them like, Eg: He was a small boy,and his wand made up his profession , something lyke that (Likes it)
Something you should know,
‘Maple Wars’ have been on a lot of mediocre serial writers. The title itself is a cliche. ><;;
Sorry dude, I’m not liking it. =P
I think Nezzy’s is Maple Wars [NEZZY . WRITE NAO .] so is Grimno’s [I think I was killed off there . Dx] and wolf[insert the numbers here] .
I think .