A review of Love Story part III (modified)

As Isaac starts his adventure he wanders into a dark rain forest… suddenly a gang of green bubbles jumps over him. Isaac quickly reacts to the problem. With his superior star-throwing skillz he quickly dishes out 12 subis that hit all of their targets. The bubbles were all dead, except one. This particular bubble suddenly got really big and started to create earthquakes. As Isaac falls a Mage suddenly jumps behind the big bubble and ordered a tree to fall over it. And with a huge BOOM the bubbled exploded spraying both Isaac and the mage with slime. The mage walked slowly forward, and held out his hand.
[Dialogue]
Mage: Hey, who’re you? I have never seen you in these regions before…
Isaac: My name is Isaac and I come from a northern village named ElNath.
Mage: Hmm, I’ve heard of that place. It’s rumored that there are yetis there am I right?
Isaac: Well apart from the fact that they’re so fat that they can’t even hold themselves up.
Mage: Ho… My name is Arkenux, nice to meet you.
Isaac: (Awkwardly) nice to meet you too.
[They both smile]
Arkenux: Where are you heading?
Isaac: To the event in the city of Kerning
Arkenux: Really? Me too! Hey, how bout we go together?
Isaac: Sure! Why not?
And so they head on their journey. As they walk on for a few hours they hear (once again) another earthquake but this time the pulses are much slower. As if there was a giant advancing toward them. Suddenly a huge arm made of crumbling rocks stretched out and grabbed Arkenux by his waist. Isaac threw his best stars at the huge monster but it was no use. The pieces of metal fell to the ground one by one. The Golem stretched out another arm and soon both Arkenux and Isaac were trapped. The Golem grumbled: I am the first obstacle that you must face in order to get to Kerning. Now I will throw you and you must survive the chute. Good Luck… wait strike that, if you need luck there’s something wrong, eh. And so the two friends got carelessly thrown in the air. ~~~1HourLater~~~
Arkenux: how long were we falling?..
Isaac: Meh.
Arkenux: What do you think where we’re going?
Isaac: Meh.
Arkenux: What’s on your mind?
Isaac: Meh.
Arkenux: WAKE UP YOU FAT PIECE OF JUNK! DON’T YOU HAVE ANY SELF-RESPECT?
Isaac: Meh.
Arkenux: Sigh…
BOOMF!!!!
Isaac: (bored) Oh look we arrived…
Arkenux: yeah…
As they lifted their heads… steel buildings towered over them, skyscrapers that passed the clouds. How were they supposed to find the Dark Lord in such a big place?!

TBC…