This is a rapid poem before I go to sleep. [EDITED]
2nd one I ever tried.
Based on Jenny’s style (AKA esteleonin, or VanillaPocki, btw, gratz on 70 ^^;;) <–MMO PART OF THE BLOG, FTW!
Withering leaves, falling down, falling, falling..
Hundreds of snowflakes, drifting down, drifting, drifting..
April comes and the flowers are blooming gracefully, blooming, blooming..
Tasteful rain is pattering down, pattering, pattering…
I speak, for all those that seek,
Someone out there, or right here.
Laughter resonating, throughout the streets,
Open-minded children, whose minds are beseemed.
Venturing into deep waters, waves splashes by,
Ending the heart, in one final cry.
Impossible to understand, the feeling expressed,
Nevertheless, it does not depress.
Love is a feeling, feeled by us all,
I know that somewhere, somewhere, just somewhere.
Finding the true one, one that will not let you fall,
Everlasting love, throughout the years.
Fearing the endless, for after it, there is nothing, but emptiness.
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Of course, grammar and syllables are a major problem in this poem, forgive me, I really wanted to see what writing a poem is really like, and by god, it’s hard O_O
Anyways, I’m off to bed.
And to all a good night!
[P.S. I got a 250 Maple Point card in MS today! :D] <– 2nd part with MMORPG in it =O
*starts slow clap*
O.o
I forgot about explanations! :O
Anyways, the first part is about the seasons, how love goes through the seasons, and in what forms.
The red leaves in Autumn.
The snowflakes for Winter.
The Blooming flowers for Spring.
The soft rain for Summer.
Second part. . . just there. xD
Third Part.
Love among the children in a VERY passive way might I mention.
And what happens when love ends between one and another.
It hurts.
4th part.
The final descriptive of love.
Final phrase, death.
AND I’M OFF TO BED. =D
I likeys much? xD
Jk jk. . . 😉
The style called ‘Acrostic.’ :X
I know Haiku.
My dog, Jessica.
Black and white, a waggy tail.
Runs fast, like the wind.
*Contuines slow clapping*
Nice poem^_^
Acrostic.
I don’t know much about writing and stuff.
D:
I’m 13, what can you expect? D:
YA! I”M LVL 70~ PRAISE ME! 😀
Sorri, haven’t been on for abit >__< But i’ll get updated!
OMG! COPYRIGHT! *goes hysterical*
I wanna ask that question too . . .what is it. . .
– VanillaPocki –