Bored Me ='( so Story 1

Bored of maplestory because i dont know how to go to aqualand dungeon.
So imma make a story hope u like it and dont make fun of me if its bad its 5am… n_n’

Im walking down the cold alleys of Kerning City.
I feel like I’m being stalked.
I start to speed walk as I feel a cold hand on my shoulder.
Then outt’ve no where i feel a sharp pain through my hurt.
I feel like it’s been torn out.
Then i fall down bleeding on the hard,wet floors.
When i wake up I’m in this house where I see no one.
I look around and I see just a regular house.
Then my heart starts to hurt again and I fall.
I feel like I’v been stabbed again.
But I’m caught by a guy.
He looks 14 like a year older then me.
When I look around I see a abandon house.
It looked nothing like a regular house.
Then he says “Hey whats your name kid?”
I can hear him but i have a headache.
He takes a dagger and holds it to my neck and repeats
“Whats your name?”
I still dont say anything because of my headache.
Then I see desperation in his eyes like he has lost someone close.
I answer him and say”Suno.Inatchi,Suno”
Then he drops me as if I were luggage.
Then he says “I’m Sasuke(Sas-suk-ke),Hijiro”
I feel that sharp pain again and i smash the wall with my head.
He holds me down and tries to stop me.
Then I go to sleep and I see a little girl running up to me
She says “Big brother,big brother good morning”
When I wake up I’m in the same house but more old and dirty.
I’m lieing on a bed and I see that it looks like a teenage boys room but more uglier.
When i explore some more I notice this is where the little girl lived.

gogogo!

ok stop

Then that guy comes into the house with some food.
The food looked good but I felt bad.
I felt like i would be wasting his money.
I go lye down again and I see a picture.
The picture shows Sasuke and that little girl.
I ask him “Do you have a sister?”
Then he takes his dagger and cuts my arm.
He looks angry and i run into the living room.
I dont feel like talking but im panting.
I feel worried so i just come out as he throws his dagger right at my heart.
I feel the pain again as I faint again.
Then I see the little girl again as she goes outside.
Then a screamed has been heard.
I run outside and I see a wild beast but it runs away.
When I wake up I’m tied up and im disarmed from my staff.
I feel sorry for him but I feel I shouldnt gve him any pity.
I feel like I should help him.
I go through the window with my staff between my feet.
I take a broken glass bottle and cut off the ropes.
Then I go hunting for the visious Jr Balrog.

One thought on “Bored Me ='( so Story 1”

  1. I didn’t get it, Instead of all those thoughts, tell us what is actually happening!
    lye = lie = Proofread!
    It has to be abit more detailed, change the name Sasuke, you wouldn’t want people calling you a Naruto freak and no originality blah blah blah, those comments does get abit discouraging so ya! change it! ^^

    ~Looking forward for your next chapter~

    – VanillaPocki –

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