When you looked at me, what were you thinking?
All i could see were your eyes that kept blinking
You bump into me and pretend to drop your a thing or 2.
I don’t get it. I just don’t have a clue.
I’m trying to be nice, and help you as I said
but instead of thanking me, your face turns red.
I know I”m popular and cool and people think I’m a hotty
But you don’t need to get all snobby and freaky
I prefer someone simple and a great hit
Not someone that so full of s**t
So before I bring up your hopes, here’s the deal
Before a hurt your feelings, just GET REAL.
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I mean absolute no offence in any of my poems, and i want to leave the “lovey dovey”side of poetry, and do something funny, and hatey sorta. xD
It was really cool and funny making this poem. Anyways, It was cool. I don’t even think you will like it and I might even get flamed for this hehe, but I’ve given in my best. Your turn to comment the rest.
I thought it was interesting.
Hey, nice poem! Yep. Although it’s a little rough for the guy you’re writing about *Pats his back*
Interesting. Because u liked my stories, i like your poems too.
Keep up the excellent poetry skills!
*sigh* That’s how all the snobs act in my school.
Not bad poetry, but time for English class! Metaphors and similes pl0x.
Please keep things MMO related also.
Ah.
Infatuation.
Males are like that.
Get clumsy when a (you know what) desire pops up.
Unless they have a BIG ego.
Not bad poetry, but time for English class! Metaphors and similes pl0x.
Please keep things MMO related also.”
Ditto, not seeing the relevance, regardless of quality.
o_o” i guess i’ll give you props for the effort.
Im sorry, but this sucks.
what the. . .