The MAple Chronicles chapter1 A New Hero

Leon left the training camp ready to meet the maple island. He is smart and sly but never cruel. A Malady prophesy said that a hero will be borned on that day. Leon is the New Hero!. Maple Island is moderatly run over by shrooms and snails but Victoria Island a lready has Drakes and Iron hogs attacking it. Even worse Ossyria has Yetis and Pixies killing everthing! IT is time for a hero.

Slash down with a shroom. 5mins later he is already level 7. Taunting voices almost immobolize his mind. Leon finally decides to go to SouthPerry for a rest.

WHAT!

a wild cargo has invaded south perry. All the GM are at Ossyria dealing with PAPA pixie. There is only one thing Leon could do.

He draws his sword.

8 thoughts on “The MAple Chronicles chapter1 A New Hero”

  1. Sickkkk AWESOME MAN! Don’t forget to add Raza the Dexless Sin who helps out and tries to be the leader and is friendly

  2. These following tips aren’t meant to discourage you from your writing, but to help you improve:

    1.) The story was much too short. Please make it at least a decent 7 paragraphs before submitting.

    2.) I spy many grammar mistakes.

    3.) The description about Leon wasn’t very good. Please elaborate in your further chapters.

    kthxbai

    [♠]

  3. A silly image came to mind when I read ‘He draws his sword’.
    It involved pencil. And paper.

    >>;

    *scurries away*

  4. SilverFx said: “A silly image came to mind when I read ‘He draws his sword’.
    It involved pencil. And paper.

    >>;

    *scurries away*”

    At least no animals were harmed unlike the image that came to my mind.

  5. Sneak Peak All people you put me on favourite will be in Maple Chronicle.
    P.S Raza is Leon Sensei

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