You once gave me a ticket,
A ticket to Orbis,
In the end I didn’t go,
I miss the ship.
You got mad,
I was sad,
You got fustrated,
You wouldn’t listen,
We broke apart,
But in my heart,
I’ll love you,
I dunt want things to change,
I dunt want you to move away,
I have your ticket,
You have my heart,
As I hold the ticket in my hand,
I imagine you still as my man,
I miss you so much,
But as I see you,
I see another girl,
What happened?
I see you touch her golden curls,
I see you laughing,
I look at the ticket,
I look at you,
As I sit there thinking,
I know the right thing to do,
I rip the ticket into a million pieces,
Hoping the pain in my heart will ease,
I dunt have your ticket,
and you won’t have my heart,
Maybe the ticket was what pulled us apart,
As I see the ticket blow away,
I know my love for you will start to fade,
My heart is the ticket now,
Ripped into a million pieces,
That nobody can have.
It’s gone,
It went,
Nobody’ll be in my heart again.
Comments please =)
‘dunt’ –> It’s ‘don’t’
And I’d have kept that ticket to chase after that jerk. It is 80k mesos after all. XD
lolx, I like using the word dunt =P, and lolx =P
“You once gave me a ticket,
A ticket to Orbis,”
Makes no sence kuz you cant trade/give/sell orbis tickets
lolx, shhhh =P “pretend” he gave her money to buy a ticket =)
Well I like it! >=o
It expressed the emotion extremely well n_n Good job.
=D
ty xD, =) and, I know my stories are confusing sumtimes xD
Lorie* <3