A Under-Water melee

Well this is my first attempt at a story it is based on true events which happened to me today adapted for your entertainment I hope you enjoy this story – Chansen
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I awoke from my rest in the Aquarium ready to fight again underwater, as I stepped towards the liquid shield which protected the buildings of Aqua Road from the depths of the ocean I looked out in gazed at the underwater world’s beauty early morning. I quickly took some air from a air bubble as a friend asked me to help her kill some jr pepes, I replied “I’ll give it a shot but don’t expect much I don’t think I can handle them well”. As soon as I replied to my friend I hung up and swam as fast as I could to the 1st floor of the orbis tower. I saw my friend hanging for her life on a rope surrounded by the minature penguins, when she saw me she quickly invited me to a party at that point I jumped down and began to use my maul and battered the penguins to death as their bodies laid scattered me and my friend collected their remains, some mesos, and their fishies I was lucky enough to find on laying near a fish spear which I soon added to my collection of weapons, my friend said thanks as we parted ways. I then headed back down the tower, towards the underwater depths and mysteries of Aqua Road.
After a few miles I became tired sot I pulled out my deck chair and sat down for a bit, a few minutes past and the water took a sudden change in tempreture I turned sharply behind me and saw a huge group of freezers heading my way! I paniced and grabbed my chair runnign as fast as I could knowning I couldn’t fight them the way I was then still running from them I dived into a small cave as the charged past taking their cold waters with them, i poked my head out of the cave and sighed with relief. As I finally packed away my chair I looked around at the area I was in, I reconisged it! It was the home of mask fish, I had a laugh as swam out calling “Zorro Zorro! I’ve found your clones!” When I was attacked from behind a mask fish bit my shoulder I swung round and smashed my maul into it’s head as it burst I removed a Needle off it and some mesos and found that it had attacked another innocent warrior as it had his or her’s jousting helm! “Better not let that go to waste!” I said as I put it on. once I got used to looking out of a small visor I found I was surrounded by a small army! They chased me for a bit as I called for help but then I just turned sharply and attacked them brutally with my slash blast technique with their blood covered bodies floating about I took my remains from them and found out exactly what they had killed, a theif with a brown pilfer, a huntress with red huntress pants, a warrior with iron knuckle gloves and someone with a korean fan. I was proud with what I had found for the small time I was there at aqua road but I still visit to annilate more mask fish!…To avenge the lifes who failed to survive their brutal ways…Rest in peace my friends….Rest in peace…

4 thoughts on “A Under-Water melee”

  1. Paragraphing is your friend. My eyes started bleeding after the first block. All you have to do . . . is hit enter twice . . . or return if you’re on a Mac . . .*weeps*

    xD Did that really happen to you, though? It’s a decent enough story, if a bit confusing. =P

  2. Not every detail happened but I was attacked by a group of freezers I just had to adapt it a bit more so it was more of a story like type and I’mn sorry about the paragraphing part in my school I was taught to hit enter once and move inwards a bit ^^; and I didn’t think there was a paragraph needed then but still thank you for the advice and I will keep that in mind for my next one – Chansen

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