Sup! I’m Jae and i happen to be a Sin. I live with my dad on the outskirts of Henesys. My mother was killed by the Ugochan clan on our family trip to Ossarya (sorry if i spelt that wrong) She was hit by a steely in the back by a sin in the Ugochan. I barely remember my mother but my father would tell me about her and how he would avenge her one day. Since i grew up with my dad and had a bad past, i learned to be tough around everybody. I hardly had any friends because of my feelings towards others. One day i decided to go walk to Kerning and my life changed…
As i was walking towards kerning, i met my best mate Bob. We come from the same clan, the Ogaran. So we both deicded to go to kerning to kill some Bubblings and Stirges.
Me: Sup. i haven’t seen u in a while wut happened?
Bob: Oh nothing i just left home for a while to train to get strong and also… its just i was… forget it.
Me: Wha’s wrong man? I’m ur best friend u can’t tell me?
Bob: Fine. You know my friend Tina?
Me: Yea. wut about her?
Bob: I’m starting to like her so i started training to get strong for her. She’s getting more and more beautiful.
Me: Than go for it bro. Nothing’s stopping you.
Bob: Yea i would but she’s in the…Ugochan clan.
Me: ….
Bob: I know. Our clan hates them for killing our members like your mom and my dad.
Me: …I dont know wut to say man.
Bob: I dont know wut to do. Look we’re in kerning already. Lets go hunt us some Bubblings and Stirges.
Me: Yea…
I kept my hatred inside me and tried not to realise it. If i did something bad would’ve happened to Bob. As we were fighting the Bubblings we spotted Tina coming our way. She was a very pretty sight but i didn’t want to take her because Bob liked her. I felt something when i saw her. My insides were becoming warm and i was happy.
Tina: Sup Bob. this must be ur friend jae you’ve been talking about.
Bob: Yea. He’s my best friend.
Tina: Hi Jae.
Me: Sup..
Tina: Wuts wrong?
Me: Nothing nothing im cool.
Tina: Oh. ok. well me and bob are off to Ossarya. I’ll see you later.
Tina hugged me before she left and i got a cold stare from Bob before he left with her. I never meant to hug her, she hugged me so it wasn’t my fault. but something inside me felt guilty for making Bob mad. I’ve never had such feeling because he was my best friend and i dont want to piss him off. After training a bit more on Bubblings and Striges, i left to go to dungeons when a dark figure jumped out and held a steely to my neck. He was breathing on my neck. He was a strong guy assuming from the hold he had on me.
Man: Are you jae from the Ogaran clan??
Jae: yes wut do u want. i’ll give u wutever just dont hurt me.
Man: I’ve known you since u were born. You grew more stronger from the last time i met you. I’m not going to hurt you i just want to tell u to give a message to your clan. tell them this, “the day is coming Ogaran. Be ready for it”.
The man jumped up into the trees and jumped away. There was blood dripping down from my neck from the the tip of the steely that sliced me lightly. His voice was familar as i ran it over my head again and again. I was confused, how had he known me since i was born? the only man i knew were all in m clan. I was confused. i decided to return home to tell this to my father.
Lol if this story sucks i dont care. I’m not much of a writer i just wrote this fast cause i was bored and had nothing to do so i wrote this to kill some time. If you like it, just tell me about it and maybe i’ll write some more
Not bad your story has potential and you should continue it. ^^ write some more and maybe it’ll become better. =)
hey u stole my title>,< but otherwise i think its an ok story
lol sorry i didn’t know it was ur title >.<