The Blood Red Flowers Intro

Since NOBODY liked my last set of stories, I’m gonna stop them, and attempt (and fail hopelessly) at making another one. This is from the semi-antagonist and semi-protagonist’s point of view, so don’t blame me if he gets too evil or corny. This one is called The Blood Red Flowers, about a bandit(semi-antagonist/semi-protagonist) who goes to an oracle, and the oracle says that he will be overpowered by the ones he loves. He loves his friends and his girlfriend, but he is too proud to be overpowered, and kills them all by the flower bush at his house. When he gains a new girlfriend, he seeks the oracle again, but the oracle says nothing but 3 words over and over. Damask Lieshae Aiyoko (pronounced Dah-Mahsk Lee-Shay Ay-ee-koh) . When he asks others what this means, they are either silenced or they drop dead on the spot. The odd thing is, when they die, blue blood comes out instead, and their soul comes out of their bodies and says Damask…Lieshae…Aiyoko…
He then seeks his new girlfriend for help, and finds out that she is a murderess. He tries to run away, but her image pops up in the reflection of the blood everytime he kills something or sees blood. He runs again to the oracle for help, and the oracle tells him to concentrate on the flowers on the bush at his house. When he sees his friends’ faces in the leaves, they tell him to go far away from his house with 1 of the leaves (to communicate with his friends).
So he packs, but right before he leaves, the murderess begins a battle, and when he goes far, far, away, he finds his true love.

3 thoughts on “The Blood Red Flowers Intro”

  1. this is a really interesting and different plot. I’d like to see how to the story goes. Go on and write you have my support. Um, this is only the summary right?

  2. yeah, this is a summary. If this was the whole thing, i’d probably be flamed=)

  3. Oh, so it’s like that thingy on the back of a book! =)
    It sounds really interesting, i’ll keep an eye out for it ^_^

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