– Panel sizes are inconsistent, overall it looks a little messier (-0.3)
– GM’s faces are too expressionless in the middle of the comic (-0.2)
– GMs are levitating at some parts- try to put them on the same level (-0.2)
– Text is in weird areas, try to put it at consistent areas around the characters (-0.1)
– Text is cut off at some parts (-0.1)
– Overall layout could be more organized (-0.4)
– Lack of backgrounds (-0.5)
Good, funny plot (+1)
Characters are well edited in, no white spaces clipping panel edges, text or characters (+1)
Original idea (+1)
– Panel sizes are inconsistent, overall it looks a little messier (-0.3)
– GM’s faces are too expressionless in the middle of the comic (-0.2)
– GMs are levitating at some parts- try to put them on the same level (-0.2)
– Text is in weird areas, try to put it at consistent areas around the characters (-0.1)
– Text is cut off at some parts (-0.1)
– Overall layout could be more organized (-0.4)
– Lack of backgrounds (-0.5)
Good, funny plot (+1)
Characters are well edited in, no white spaces clipping panel edges, text or characters (+1)
Original idea (+1)
That happened to me before, but it was a chase, not a robbery.
Err, get backgrounds?
Detailed review.
(- = flaw, = good, = suggestion, base score = 7/10)
– Panel sizes are inconsistent, overall it looks a little messier (-0.3)
– GM’s faces are too expressionless in the middle of the comic (-0.2)
– GMs are levitating at some parts- try to put them on the same level (-0.2)
– Text is in weird areas, try to put it at consistent areas around the characters (-0.1)
– Text is cut off at some parts (-0.1)
– Overall layout could be more organized (-0.4)
– Lack of backgrounds (-0.5)
Good, funny plot (+1)
Characters are well edited in, no white spaces clipping panel edges, text or characters (+1)
Original idea (+1)
Overall Score : 8.2/10
Have the panels a uniform size, i.e. if read from L>R, have the height the same, T>B would be width the same
Panels should be an equal space apart in rows
If a word can’t fit in a line of text, put a – between two syllables and put the second part of the word in the next line
Backgrounds would be useful if the content of the comic would be enhanced by backgrounds (in some rare cases, it isn’t)
The “Yoink” could be just with a pair of asterisks or hyphens instead of a sign
Characters should use expressions more often in relation to their dialogue, unless the viewers know that a certain character uses them rarely
No need for a “The End”, it’s too cliche’d anyway
Copyright format should be similiar to “Copyright © (year) (name)”
(- = flaw, = good, = suggestion, base score = 7/10)
– Panel sizes are inconsistent, overall it looks a little messier (-0.3)
– GM’s faces are too expressionless in the middle of the comic (-0.2)
– GMs are levitating at some parts- try to put them on the same level (-0.2)
– Text is in weird areas, try to put it at consistent areas around the characters (-0.1)
– Text is cut off at some parts (-0.1)
– Overall layout could be more organized (-0.4)
– Lack of backgrounds (-0.5)
Good, funny plot (+1)
Characters are well edited in, no white spaces clipping panel edges, text or characters (+1)
Original idea (+1)
Overall Score : 8.2/10
Have the panels a uniform size, i.e. if read from L>R, have the height the same, T>B would be width the same
Panels should be an equal space apart in rows
If a word can’t fit in a line of text, put a – between two syllables and put the second part of the word in the next line
Backgrounds would be useful if the content of the comic would be enhanced by backgrounds (in some rare cases, it isn’t)
The “Yoink” could be just with a pair of asterisks or hyphens instead of a sign
Characters should use expressions more often in relation to their dialogue, unless the viewers know that a certain character uses them rarely
No need for a “The End”, it’s too cliche’d anyway
Copyright format should be similiar to “Copyright © (year) (name)””
Holy Crap.
o_o
Wow.
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Erm, did you get that idea from Epic Movie? o.o
Erm.
What’s Epic Movie? o-o
What’s Epic Movie? o-o”
Not you, the other guy.