United Shadows: Chapter 1

I looked down at the girl and saw that she had been so afraid of the Bandit that she was trembling. She looked roughly 17 years old and had a very beautiful face messed up with redness from her tears and a trembling look.

“Put your clothes on and go home, I’m not here to hurt you,” I said.

She nodded and started to put her clothes on and kept looking at me like I was a freak. I didn’t care, as I had some sort of hate towards love. She finally got dressed in her Maroon China Set and looked very attractivel. As she was walking out, I saw a sort of shadow around the corner. A man jumped at her when she walked out and I immediately went to her help. The man was a high ranking of warriors, wearing a Blue Commandore set. A Blue Dragon Bubata rested on his head and a Black Giles Cape hung over his shoulders. On his feet were Orihalcon War Greaves and in his Dark Imperial covered hand was a Hellslayer.

“What are you doing? This poor girl just got harassed by a Bandit!” I said as she turned around.

“I should ask you what are YOU doing, seeing as you’re a lower ranking position than me!” He yelled back.

He swung his Hellslayer down at me, underestimating my abilities and missed while I sidestepped. It slammed into the ground creating massive tremors everywhere. I focused mana into my Red Snowshoes and jumped up into the air, standing on it.

“The hell?! How did you do that?!” He yelled, seeing as I was in the air.

My mana was continually releasing from my Snowshoes, glowing bright blue. I walked towards the twins, seeing them still unconscious, I put them on my shoulders and went to the nearest inn. I purchased a room and set the twins down on the bed, as I left, I shut the shades and put the ‘Do Not Disturb’ sign on the door. I also left a note for them and I went back to the Fusion Bar. The warrior wasn’t there anymore, nor was the girl. It was regular again as I entered.

“Hey! Barkeeper!” I yelled.

No reply. I tried yelling again louder, still no reply. I jumped over the counter and saw that there were several footprints behind it. I decided to pull out a bottle of beer for myself and as I pulled it out, it got stuck and a click sounded through the silent air. I pushed the case that held the beer and found myself in a hidden compartment of the Fusion Bar, a strip club. Everyone was partying hard and I saw the warrior up on front.

“Strip strip strip!” he continually yelled as he dropped bags and bags of meso on the floor for the strippers to pick up, which they did and they started stripping themselves to the bra and panty. I knew one thing, the girls weren’t happy about this, which disgusted me. I picked up the nearest club and smashed it against the wall. Everyone’s attention turned to me.

“Hey! You’re that guy from earlier!” the man in the Blue Commandore said, “I thought you were chicken and ran away.”

“You want a fight? You got one!” I yelled back.

He drew his weapon and jumped right at me. I merely sidestepped at the last second and made him crash into the counter behind the door. Everyone started jumping at me as they tried to murder me. I evaded their attacks swiftly and punched them right through the wall. The strippers put their armor back on and tried to run away, only to face a guard 5 times their size.

“Get back there and strip!” he yelled loudly.

I saw this and ignored everyone. I decided to knock everyone out for a while. I drew my Doombringer and use Sonicboom, which surprised everyone. I took this chance to run up to the guard and knock him out.

“Go go go!” I yelled to the girls.

They ran for their lives and scrambled all around Kerning City.

“Hey! You ruined my club! You better pay me big bucks!” said a random person, coming up to me, “And you guards said that no one would care if we made the club!”

“Sorry, boss,” They kept apologizing.

“Make it up to me by killing that guy!” he yelled.

The guards came at me, with brass knuckles in their hands. I let them deliver a punch the to face, only not to be phased by this action.

“That the best you got? Let me show you what a real punch is like!” I said and I punched him with such strength that he flew out the wall.

The boss looked at me, trembling.

“Spare me! I’ll do anything! I promise!” he yelled for mercy.

“Turn this back into a bar, like it used to be!” I yelled with calmness in my voice.

“Okay, okay, whatever you say,” he muttered.

I left and went to check on the twins, still knocked out cold. I fell asleep and woke up the next morning. I went to the bar and saw what it’s supposed to be. I sat next to a man, who I didn’t notice was the man with the Hellslayer. He looked at me and I shot a look back at him.

“Those were some slick moves back there boy,” he commented, “where’d you learn’em?”

“Look into my eyes and tell me who I am,” I whispered to him.

He looked very closely and his eyes widened with shock.

“Y-Y-Your An-,” was all he could say before I cut him off.

“Yes it’s me, keep it down,” I whispered.

“But what are you doing here?” he asked.

“I could say the same to you,” I replied.

“Fine fine, I’m here because I’ve outpowered everything! I can’t find a decent challenge anymore,” he said, “so I come here to not think about it and have fun. What about you?”

“I just came here for a drink. I’ve never had one since like 17 years ago,” I replied.

“Ohh, wanna be friends?”

“Yeah, you already know my name, what’s yours?”

“The names Niel.”

And thus, Niel became my newest friend. We talked for a few hours about our travels and stories. When we left the bar, it was already sunset. We both decided that we would meet here tomorrow morning and maybe go on an adventure if the twins were awake. I returned to the hotel room, seeing another person also, this time it was a man with a Casters.

“Sup Andy,” the mysterious man said.

“Long time no see, Iggy, what brings you here?” I replied.

15 thoughts on “United Shadows: Chapter 1”

  1. nah just kidding nice story, lol

    uhh what was i going to say and ewww at some parts lol

    i liked it better than your other fanfics continue plz

  2. At least make some sense. ‘Boringer’ is not a word. Your name is an insult to Christians and if you find someones blog boring, DON’T COMMENT ON IT.

  3. Azn if someone makes a comment that your fanfic is bad you start yelling at them -.-

  4. I’m not saying your immature. I’m just saying, 13 year olds think alike. I don’t see how that is calling you immature, let alone hint that.

  5. Err. Other kids are 13 year old and they’re as immature as sht while I’m not.

  6. Well, we get along well, when ummm we’re not writing fanfics, we’re to competetive

    I’m going to make me a soft pretzel

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