Hey, I’m back to mmo, but on a different account.

*note* i like that one better cuz i like the name better.

it’s Shatred.

TTYL

Since my writing dreams were crushed here on MMO, I decided to become a critic here.

Dictionary.com

crit·i
n.
1)One who forms and expresses judgments of the merits, faults, value, or truth of a matter.
2)One who specializes especially professionally in the evaluation and appreciation of literary or artistic works: a film critic; a dance critic.
3)One who tends to make harsh or carping judgments; a faultfinder. read more

Hey guys.

I have decided to quit MMO Tales. I guess it’s from lack of enthusiam after seeing this community wane down. And from the fact that I spend 2 hours on a chapter from my story, get 50 views, and have no one comment. I don’t really care about the ‘like’ thing, but I would like to see some comments after people read them. The reason I write these stories is cuz lack of MS and how to improve on my creative writing. read more

Your voice echoes in my mind,
I thought you were kind.
You gave me security,
Now I know it was pity.

You gave me false hope,
You let go of my rope.
Now I’m stranded here,
I have so much to fear.

I guess this is how it feels,
Now my heart will seal.
I can’t believe you could bail,
I just felt betrayal.

Now I can’t trust anyone,
That stab felt like a gun.
Things are different now,
To make them right, I don’t know how. read more

Warnings: Please do not continue to read this if you are inexperienced with extreme cases of love or hate reading long stories. I write this to improve my English grade, so excuse me if this story is not up to professional quality. I am thirteen, not like twenty-six or something. So if this sucks, deal with it and cry your eyes out.

Okay, on with the story! read more

My life was a mess,
Nothing seemed right.
I knew so much less,
When you came into light.

You tried to coax my love,
I guess I never knew.
‘Til that fateful shove,
I guess I felt it too.

Never would have known,
Never would have lived like this.
When I stepped in the zone,
Began these times of bliss.

Now everything’s alright,
Nothing can go wrong.
I know this love is tight,
When I heard that fateful song. read more

Just a question: Why do people hate love stories that much? o.O

Hey, sorry! I haven’t been posting lately because my harmony exam is coming up, this Saturday, to be exact, and my mom took away my internet. Well, I’m on now because I’m checking my email for my violin teacher’s reply.

Anyways, I’m in a bit of a poem/song craze right now, but I haven’t forgotten my story. The question is: Should I continue to post poems/songs or head back to stories? read more

My MS bros: Sunfeekim, Wil

MS mom: Shihohu
MS dad: white1004

=)

Girl:
Never looked too far,
Sitting here in my car.
Always hiding in my shell,
I guess you can never tell.

Guy:
I was searching for the one,
Who shines like the sun.
‘Til I set my eyes on you,
I hope you feel this too.

Together:
Now there’s nothing left to hide,
With you by my side.
Tonight’s the night,
Everything feels so right.

Girl:
Now I’ve changed in a way,
You make night seem like day.
That feeling inside me,
I’ve opened my eyes to see. read more