Chapter 01: Comrades

There are some friendly people who have taken it upon themselves to defend the towns. Entire groups of people have even gathered to help. One of these people is FireFarseer, or as many people call him, Fire.

FireFarseer is an experienced bowman, given the title ‘ranger’ in fact and resided in Henesys for a time. He has dark eyes and long black hair. Fire wears a black, gold-lined hat which slants over his left eye, allowing him to focus his right or as it’s famously known, the ‘Marksmanship Eye’. He wears a dark enchanted robe, and wields a Bow of Magical Destruction, rumored to have been given to him by his mentor. read more

Chapter 02: A New Darkness

“Hmm, it looks as if the advantage is in our favour, quickly Dunn, let’s fall back for now.” Commanded Fire.

“You’re the leader.”

The duo ran across the grassy fields behind a cover of trees. The wind blew gently through the trees, making the leaves fall onto the grass below.

Fire regulated his breathing again into quick bursts, he asked. “Hey, are you all right Dunn?” read more

Heh, this is the first copy of my story so far, sort of a ‘proto-type’ of what the actual story is going to be like. Anyways, if you have the time to read through my chapters, (which I doubt) and leave some suggestions, that would help a lot. Mind you, this was much easier to type on WordPad then here, so expect more mistakes then the original copy. read more