Phase Shift: Comic 1

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Part 1. I know I labeled the date as November 3rd and today’s the 4th, but it’s because I started on the 3rd.

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Enjoy, I guess?

P.S. Leave recommendations please. Still accepting characters in later parts.

13 thoughts on “Phase Shift: Comic 1”

  2. AznRiceFan said: “Good editing, but much, much, much too confusing.“

    And the transitions could be worked on, but otherwise very good. ^^

  3. Ill join
    : D
    <bannedstory version=”2.0″><item id=”00002000″ type=”body” made=”o”/><item id=”00030100″ type=”hair” made=”o” hairColor=”2″/><item id=”00020012″ type=”face” made=”o” eyeColor=”4″ faceExpression=”blink”/><item id=”01032012″ type=”Ear Accessory” made=”o”/><item id=”01050057″ type=”Overall” made=”o”/><item id=”01102101″ type=”Cape” made=”o”/><item id=”01082138″ type=”Gloves” made=”o”/><item id=”01072052″ type=”Shoes” made=”o”/><item id=”01302019″ type=”Weapon – One Handed Sword” made=”o”/></bannedstory>
    There you go a code for you. . .
    (oh yes he’s evil btw)
    XD
    Name= Teshiron Farzon
    The blade has -100 Saturation btw as well.
    Mkay thats all for now

  4. Messy.

    The editing was good, but the ordering of the panels? Much could be improved there. (:

  5. ShiningWings said: “Messy.

    The editing was good, but the ordering of the panels? Much could be improved there. (:”

    Quote for truth.

  6. It’s beautiful like a hot, blonde swim-suit model, but it’s also dumb (as in confusing) like one, too.

  7. Then, what should be done about the panels? How are they confusing? What’s the problem with ordering/transitions?

    Thanks for comments and advice though.

  8. Uh basically, before you post something, read over it in the eyes of someone who know nothing and see if you can follow it.

    Either that, or show your comic to a friend, see if they can understand it.

    But your editing is really good, so this could turn out really good.

  11. Heres a pic and the stuff.
    Evil guy

    Hes an evil guy who is like the boss or something and pops up and kills random people .

    BTW the hair and eyes are red

  12. It’s really good editing but It is sorta messy, I can’t tell whether or not it’s a new panel.
    Perhaps, You could number them? It makes an idiot’s life simpler. . .90% of that idiot being me.

  13. snowhamster said: “It’s really good editing but It is sorta messy, I can’t tell whether or not it’s a new panel.
    Perhaps, You could number them? It makes an idiot’s life simpler. . .90% of that idiot being me.”

    and 10% its not you jkjkjk

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