So yeah, this is my second one. I’m trying to make it more interesting, but so far, only 1 comment and no likes. So here I go… For those of you who didn’t read the first one, you should probably read it, but I have no idea what I’m doing…
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I was enshrouded with darkness all over me. I couldn’t see a thing, I tried finding where Shiba is, but it’s like being in a glass dome. His voice comes from every direction.
” Hahaha… ‘ I’m the one who will be weak and pathetic?’ nonsense,” Shiba continued,” I’m the Master of Darkess, I can do whatever I please to you, and you can’t find where I am.
It was true, I can’t find where he is, or when he’s going to attack me again. Is it going to be a regular attack? A combo attack? A spell attack? Or another repetition surrounding ambush? I thought and thought, kneeling down in the darkness. I thought, if he’s in one place what if I use a spell to cut the area in half to seperate the sound. There should be an area where there’s no sound, and another with sound. I waited like a sitting duck, for that moment when he starts gloating at me… It came…
” Trying to find where I am?” Shiba said,” USELE-“
” EXPLOSION!!!” I yelled.
” Think you can hit me with that?” came one side,” what a weak, pathe-“
” ICE STRIKE!!!” I targeted the area that his voice was coming from.
” URRRGH!!!” Shiba grunted as he was directly hit by the ice strike.
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Talk about lucky shot. 0.o, and yay! Zephan found a way to beat Shiba! Will he be able to beat Shiba, or will he not be able to defeat him? Let’s continue with the story!
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” Uuurgh… lucky guess,” said Shiba,” next time you won’t be so lucky. I used the same tactics to hit him again. I felt blood splatter infront of me. By now, Shiba should be very weak and highly injured.
” Eat this!” Shiba said,” Death in 10 Paces!”
” AAAAAAAARGH!!!” I said, as he attacked me with an endless amount of repetition. I have to use it now I said.
Right at the moment of the next slash… ” SHINING RAY!!!!” I heard him being sent back in one directions. This is my one and only chance! I concentrated all of my remaining mana into this one final attack. Before he could get up and run. I HAVE TO USE IT!
” Great arrow of the North and South, I command thee to come at my command.” I continued as a bow formed in my hand,” the powers of Ice, Fire, Poison, and Thunder, Join together for this one last attack”
” 4 ELEMENT COMPOSITION ARROW!!!!” I used the remaining amount of my mana, and shot in that one direction… I heard no sound, did he die instantly, or did he get up in time to dodge it?
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Kero kero kero kero kero kero kero…. We will now see… What will happen. Here’s an update, if the enshrouded darkness lifts, Zephan wins, if not… his chance to win will be slimmed to nearly none. Let’s see what’s happening. BACK TO STORY!
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The darkness started to lift, I was beginning to see the light of day. But, the darkness didn’t completely disappear. Which means… I didn’t beat him, I only injured him more.
” Urrrgh….” said Shiba as he coughed blood out of his mouth,” you… bastard…. how could I, a superior ruler of a clan… be de..fea…ted….by…….you…” Those were the last words that came out of his mouth, he was dead. The darkness enshrouded around me completely disappeared. As I saw the blinding light of day, I collapsed. I won…
TO BE CONTINUED…
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Soooo, what did ya think? Ok, or needs improvement? I couldn’t think of much since I’m going this on the second day. What will happen next? You’ll have to read the next chapter to find out…
use a gamma checker go to mips story there one called how to inprove your story it has a link to a gamma checker i use it now to 😛
I have no idea what you’re talking about, I’m merely in summer vaction, and going to 7th grade. So haw.
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