I was in my bed at the hotel thinking of the days events. I’m glad that I wont have to deal with the cheif bandit anymore, but what would I do now, it would get boring in el nath, I decided that tomorrow I would head to ellina. I fell asleep.
All of the sudden I was there, again, in the battle with the cheif bandit, but how, he had been hospitalized. He began to slash relentlessly at me with his dragons tail. I was helpless. He kept slashing until I fell to the floor.
Cheif Bandit: I’ve come to kill you
Me: I thought you were in the hospital
Cheif Bandit: I was
Me: how did you make such a quick recovery
Just then I was awoken by Sami. Thank goodness it was just a dream
Sami: hi
Me: I just had a bad nightmare, the cheif bandit, he came back
Sami: oh, well its good that it was just a dream
Me: wanna get some breakfast
Sami: sure
We went to a nearby restaurant. I had waffles and Sami had eggs.
Sami: I never got a chance to ask you, who is that guy
Me: the cheif bandit?
Sami: yeah
Me: no idea
Sami: I think i owe you for saving me from him
She handed me a sack of 100k.
Me: no, I dont want it
Sami: take it
Me: ok, thanks
We left the restaurant happily. I went back to the hotel and watched TV for a while. It was almost lunch time when I remembered to tell Sami about going back to ellina, if we didnt make the 1 o’clock ship then we would have to wait 20 days for the next one! I went into her room. She too was watching TV.
Me: hey Sami, I was wondering, well, would you like to head back to ellina
Sami: I’d love to
Me: well, the next ship leaves at 1 and its 11:30, so I think we should get going
Sami: ok
We went to orbis tower and climbed up it with ease. I enjoyed when the jr. pepes dropped their fish snacks. For some reason, they were my favorite monster to kill.
We reached the ticketing booth when the train from ludibrium had just arrived. I recognized one of the men that came out of the train. It was my old childhood friend, Cody.
TO BE CONTINUED
hmm could bt nice but you need to make a bit longer story
also you should use more action and beter words
last you must wel if you like i mean write what the ME thinks