He lays there wondering. . .
thinking about where he came from. . .
a box. . . packaged like a childs toy. . .
he hurts because he knows that the surface beneath him will be gone soon. . .
White. . . No color but just a shade. . .
White means purity but he’s scared. . .
Why is he scared?. . .
Happiness is a distant memory. . .
he is no longer surrounded by those like him. . .
here he is isolated on “White”. . .
he waits for his fate. . .
Something wet on his head. . .
its golden. . .
its falling from the sky. . .
Hope. . . Hope is raining upon him. . .
Golden Rain which to wash himself with. . .
he- HOLY CRAP WHERE’D THAT FORK COME FROM!!
the silver prongs impale. . .pierce through him. . .
“CRUNCH”
its over now. . .
and 11 others wait in the box. . .
for their fate. . .
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Well alter i tried to expand but keep my CRazy Shenanigans
bonus points to anyone who figures all the symbolism in the poem
well im not sure if its good enough for you guys but its good enough for me
Waffle can be: “deep” or whatever
other poems by waffle: link
and dont forget: link
that was my first maple maple poem from a while back
Wow, intense. 😛
Well you pretty much pointed out most of the symbolism with statements such as the golden rain being hope XD
But uh. I dunno. I’m lost 😛 I really wish I could understand it, it seems so interesting :3
I can’t seem to pull together what kind of children’s toy comes in dozens in a box though o_o;
Oh, one thing. . .
Not Maple Related! XD
I really wanna know what’s going on though 😛 Please reveal sometime.
Not Maple Related! XD”
yeah but this is one of the few times you’ll ever hear me say: everybody’s doin’ it
lol
Waffle Poems, I’ll call them Waflloems from now on. Easier to remember!
Waffloems are amazing and godly.
Wow I feel stupid by not getting that symbolism XD
Gooooodlish~ <3
You have 5 in your poem if i didn’t count wrong. . . i think. . .
1.box
2. childs toy
3. white
4. golden rain
5. fork – “silver prongs”
yea. . . i think thats it
I liked it 
i laughed my @$$ off reading this, brilliant
lol waffle
i like the part with the fork