Spearman Pride Part I

As i woke up from bed i realized i was late for the ship to orbis! I had to get there because there giving alway free items!

Jake- Huh what time is it?

Jake- (looks at clock) Ahh 5 mins until ship leaves!!

*Runs to the station*

Jake- I need a ticket to orbis

Station Worker A- Well there 5k each

Jake- Heres 5k now hurry!

Station Worker A- Heres your ticket

Jake-Whatever *runs to the ship*

Jake- Heres the ticket

Station Worker B- No can do these tickets are fake!

Jake- What i bought it from that guy!

Station Worker B- What do you mean?? Im the only one here the ticket booth is in Kerning City

Jake- But..But…But…

Station Worker B- Tough luck kid

Jake-(Thinks to himself) What am i going to do! Ughh

???- (Gives Jake a ticket and then gets onboard)

Jake-Wait who are you!

Jake-(walks to the ship)

Jake-Heres the ticket

Station Worker B- Welcome aboard

Jake- (bewildered where am i why are there some much people on the ship)

Jake-(spots the person who gave him the ticket) Hey

???- Runs to the bottom of the ship

Jake- Wait up!

All of a sudden the ship starts to move, Jake was forced to sit down and not bother anyone. He waits for some time and then a crash! He stares out side

Jake- What the FISH!

Creature-Shoots lightling setting ship on fire

Jake- No!! He sees the creatures ship

Creature-ARghhhh *Shoots thunder

Jake- Hey fat and ugly! come here

The creature goes over to Jake, Then jake remembered what he found. He got a red curved spear and threw it at the beasts directly at the heart. The beast shudders and dies.. Jake then thinks of a plan

Jake- Everyone!! Follow me!!

???-Cmon you heard him!

Jake-Cmon hurry if you wanna live!!

Everyone follows jake so does the mysterious person, Jake leads them on the creature`s ship. Then Jake drove the ship but something was wrong.. Someone was in the pilot room..

To Be Continued…..

Tell me if you want me to write more its my first story =

7 thoughts on “Spearman Pride Part I”

  1. First off, you might want to actually stop and explain things.
    The story goes too fast
    It’s kind of like saying:
    He woke up
    He peed
    He brusehd his teeth
    He ate
    He went on his journey
    Lol

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