Love Fozen in El Nath – Part I

This started all when I was a beginner I was doing not so well in Maple Island with the snails as I see a orange mushroom pop out from the tomato bush.

I gasp in fear highly of my death is come near as a brave beginner swept infront of me doing amazing damage in my eyes as I watches him exhausted but amazed of him.

I began to say “Thank you so much, i’m Tsukkie. May I ask for your name?”
To him it was nothing as he replied “It’s nothing, you can call me Cjeey”
But I fallowed him everywhere as we trained together and left Maple island. We gained our jobs as I was a mage to become a Cleric so I can be by his side forever. And so he became a Thief throwing his amazing stars.

I fallowed him everywhere as we trained and we travaled all around Victoria gaining our strengh as we level together. We travaled until years pass as we gained to our second job advancent. I finaly became a Cleric and he an Assassin.

We kept on travaling as I stayed behinde him healing as more years pass by until we where level 50 as my love grew more.

We started to head to El Nath while we where in Orbis tower. heading out to the cold snow as I shivered tremendously as he covers me under his left arm and his Napoleon cape. I blushed all red as we walked on as he took the cape off and went a few steps forward as we faced a small cute Yeti as he takes it out in two Lucky seven of his amzing steelys.

We began climbing a mountain as we get so high that the forest of snow covered trees looked so small as we came to the top and began to walk, I asked “Hey mister will you be mine?”
As he replied “Tsukkie-chan how long has it been, 3 years that you fallowed me?”
Me- “I will fallow you to the end even if it kills me”

We saw another cute Yeti. but the thing is, as my Love took out his Steely the Yeti became Huge!!

I gasp in fright as it creeps closer until it puts both of his arms up and began to strike. At that moment he grabbed me and jumped while the ground shook rapidly. He jump and throws his Steelys many times as the Yeti is now weak. It began to do a final strike as he reaches for his Kunai case but nothing was there!

My eyes opened widely as he runs and pushes me back until the Yeti strikes!
He get hit by the massive earthquake as he falls over the cliff. I sceamed at him calling “CJEEY!!!” as streams of tears fall down my face, I look over the exhausted Yeti and screamed mustering all my Magic power into an Arrow as fired it disentergrating the Yeti as I ran beside the cliff yelling his name. But nothing replyed, only the cold wind blowing against my face.

I headed to El Nath alone with streams of tears down my face as all I have of his was this Dark Napoleon on my back as I journeyed opon the land of where he has dissapeared and so I whisper opon my self.

“Cjeey where are you?”

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My first story so far and more will come. I’m hoping this wasn’t to boring at the start so I’ll try to do my best to make it better!

15 thoughts on “Love Fozen in El Nath – Part I”

  1. wow. very good. no matter what anyone will say, or has said– yours are much better than mine . i like mine, but urs are pretty exciting ^^;;

  2. sooo pwettyful omg u r so born to be a aothar *waits for the next story* can it be out now plz?

  3. ^ – Sorry it’s my bed time, i’ll try to finish one in the morning while i’m at school.

  4. Nice story, Bit repetative in the middle, but the plot is amazing.

    I feel just this first part could be extended over several chapters. ^__^

  5. ^ Yep me want looong! Yes I know repeative, I was hoping to make like a flash back to cover that. T-T”;

  6. Storys r crap. get a life. might as well write a book instead of posting garbage on the internet.

    If you want to be popular, why don’t u publish it to people’s opinions that actually matter?

  7. Lol. I reckon the stories really good so sad, But im wondering is it true cause ive always wondered if there were players that have been together for so long and leveled together?

  8. Great story! I love it! But I need to say something: try to use “as” a bit less.

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