Hi this is a story based on how i found a shinkita if u like my story say so, if u dont say so too any criticism is good i always say because if i know whats wrong i can fix it ok time for you to read.

Chapter 1 : The Sauna

Our story begins with our hero TheifCloud (TC) of the Bera planet in the MapleGlobal Universe.
(Where all planets are identicle.)

Our hero was taking a well diserved rest at the sleepywood hotels famous sauna.

Thiefcloud (TC) picks up a ladle of water to splash onto the hot coals as it hit the coals the water evaporates
and a rush of steam passes our heros face.

Moments later a Bandit (B) enterd the room and The light bounced of his shinkita and into our heros eye.

TC: What the!, Our Hero exclaimed
B: Oh sorry This dam shiny thing.
TC: You should of left that at the desk its gonna rust.
B: No its not its 100% gold and the blade is solid titanium.
TC: Wow thats pretty cool.
B: Yeah i know its awsome i love it to death.
TC: Hmmm do u mind if i take a look?
B: Sure you can use it but if u run ima hunt you down.

The Bandit cautiously hands thiefcloud his shinkita

TC swings it around a few times.
TC: Wow its awsome its really heavy tho.
B: Yeah but its strong.
TC: How strong.
B: About 72 strongs. 😛
TC: ahaha whats that supposed to mean?
B: Oh nothing.
TC: aight well i goto go bye bye.

ThiefCloud changes to dimension 17 of the 20 possible dimensions

TC: YES!! Free Shinkita.

The End……………….

NOT! ahha im not noob like that ok on with the story.

ThiefCloud changes back to dimension 8

B: Oh my god there you are give me my shinkita back.
TC: aha i was only joking here you go.

The Bandit Hastily takes his weapon back.

B: kool i thought u were gonna be one of those noobs and steal it.
TC: nah im not like that.
B: good.
TC: yeah theres a virus going around.
B: yeah the noob virus haha.

ThiefCloud rolls on the floor laughing

B: ahaha. well i have to go now.
TC: Ok but before you go can u tell me somthing.
B: Sure what is it?
TC: Where can i get one of those i really like it?
B: Well theres A monster that protects the shrine deep in the Dungeon at the center of Victoria Island. A tremendous
warrior with a bull’s head and a man’s body, it uses its spear, complete with an enormous crescent moon as its tip,
to attack with lightening, destroying everything in its path. Since it has a tendency to ram right into an enemy,
it is very quick-footed and powerful with the potent lightening attack at its arsenal. Just don’t get too close to it.
TC: Ok thanks for the information.
B: No problem bye
TC: Cya

The bandit leaves the room
Thiefcloud sits there pondering whether to venture down into the dungeon to slay the beast…

The End

If i get enough good coments ill write the dungeon part which will have a talking drake in it XD

So look out for Chapter 2 : The Dungeon

Oh and Please leave a comment and even say u like it if you do