This has nothing to do with MMO, but this is a really sad story, to me anyway,
but I think a lot of you will think it’s sad. I read a story similar to this, and It was really
touching, so It inspired me to write about a sad short story. So I hope you enjoy ^^;
Just in case…NO ONE WILL MAKE A STORY OUT OF THIS!…okay =0
EDIT: Lol never mind that, fenrir already did that…X3
EDIT: I don’t care if you flame, really oo
A Lost Love
I sat there, holding the diary in my hand, wetting the page
with my tears. Unable to speak, I rested my head on the book, and cried.
Second Grade
I had a strange sickness which lasted for 4 years, so I skipped kindergarten and
first grade. It was my first day of school, and I was very shy, and refused to speak,
as I never been outside alone without my parents before. A few kids tried being
friends with me, but I ignored them and they took it a wrong way, then in turn,
ignored me as well. I could barely say a word, and many thought I was wierd, even
the teacher. Out of all of them, one stood out. A pretty girl with long, smooth, black hair.
She talked to me. She was really nice too. She helped me with lots of things, and
played with me, while the other kids didn’t. Gradually, my shyness was
sapping away, and I talked to everyone. Soon, I was everyone’s friend, and that
girl, Clarissa, we became the best of friends ever since then.
Seventh Grade
It was our first day in middle school, so we were both nervous. Luckily, both of us were
in the same classes. She grew even cuter, and more beautiful. Sometimes I would
blush when I was around her. She saw it, and then laughed, and I laughed back.
Middle school flew by. I wish she could of been mine, but I knew she didn’t see me that way.
Junior Year
She called me at the middle of the night, saying she had just broken up with her boyfriend,
and didn’t want to be alone, so I came to her house. We played card games, studied
for a big math test, and watched a scary movie at midnight. She held on to my arm,
and screamed in delight. I looked at her again. We had promised to be the best of friends,
always. I wanted her to be mine, but I knew she didn’t see me that way.
Senior Year
it was almost the end of the schoolyear. I couldn’t hold back anymore.
I loved her. I was about to confess, until she called me and told me she got together
with her ex-boyfriend. I pretended to be happy for her, but deep inside,
I was in pain. The day before the prom, she said her boyfriend was sick, and asked
me If I wanted to go in his place, as “best friends”, and so I did.
Prom Night
We had a great time at the prom. I was dropping her off at her house. When we
were by the front door. “Thanks for everything, you’re the best!” she said,
and kissed me on the cheek. After that, I went home, and cried for a long time.
“She has a boyfriend, it’s already too late.” I thought to myself, and slept.
A few nights later
Soon after the prom, she got in a car accident, and died. I didn’t go to her
funeral. I know I should of, but I couldn’t take it all in. She was my best friend,
and I loved her, and now she’s gone, forever. Her mother had given me her
diary. I didn’t open it, until now. Sitting by her grave, I flipped through the pages.
I stopped at the last entry, dated November, 24, the day she had died.
I had the best time at the prom night with my best friend. All these years were
filled with happiness because of him. I’m really glad I became his best friend.
I’m very confused at myself however. I loved him ever since seventh grade. I knew
he didn’t see me that way though, so I never confessed to him. I wanted to know
if he loved me, so I pretended I had a boyfriend, and that I broke up with him,
and then got together again. I just wanted to spend time with him. It was really
stupid of me to do that. He didn’t sound sad at all, so at the time, I thought
he liked somebody else. I can’t take it anymore! I’m going to head over to
his house, and tell him everything, and confess! <3
That was the end of the diary. “She died that day…by a car! She was going
to confess to me…that day…” Nothing else but sadness creapt inside me.
I sat there, wetting the page with my tears. Unable to speak, I rested my head
on the book, and cried.
Story End –
Thanks for reading everyone. I actually cried reading this to myself, maybe
because my crush’s name is Clarissa ^^;
T___T
Oh the angsty irony. ;__;
i guess i think i made it sad enough,
thats so sad, nice story =)
I’ve seen a story like this before, but the situation is still so sad. T-T
I have too but I don’t care T_T
You have touched my soul~
Curse you for making me cry~
I’m sorry. Hey, I cried too though
*robotic voice*
WHAT IS THIS LOVE OF WHICH YOU SPEAK.
INSOLENT HUMAN.
GIVE ME A COOKIE AND YOU SHALL BE SPARED.
♠
Wait a minute. Am I supposed to cry? o__o
*drinks coffee*
Pretty sad though, did you get this in a chain mail?
EDIT: Regardless of its non-MMO-relatedness. . .T__T
Can someone make a drama out of this?
lol its not a chain mail. and i changed the story around! its not the same thing. made it MUCH longer. I ain’t giving you a cookie!
Will you give MEEE a cookie?
*Sparkly eyes*
I have a feeling that soon, somebody will make a mmo story out of this o_O
No! I may have seen a story like this, but I made this up! No one can do that! T_T
*Gives cookie to hamster*
Not spade because he called me “insoulent”, lolz
I read up to seventh-grade
This is super-random and isn’t MMO-Relevant at all
i mean, i’m trying not to be so forumish but really
this doesn’t even have a lick of MMO-Relevance
as if that wasn’t bad enough, it was totally anti-irony
i expected it because i knew i wasn’t going to expect it -_-
At least make the chick name balrog or something
that way it’s not as bad and i have something to laugh at
isnt that what i said waffle story? it doesnt have to do with mmo. if its what u dont want to read, then leave.
Then it doesn’t belong in a blog it belongs in the forum
I don’t care if it’s a sad story or not because blogs are meant for MMO-Relevance =/
not entirely. many blogs r random, i decide to blog it, its my choice. if u dont like it, i dont really care
Do you mind me adapting it? XD
Oh you adapt it before asking?
lolwut? That was so corny. O_o
Oh by the way. RULES ARE RULES. PLEASE MAKE ATLEAST A 5 SENTENCE PARAGRAPH MMO RELATED kthxbai (:
aw tahts so sad . i believe i read a similar one as well .
Very touching. But yeah, to relevant points: Not MMO. Not saying it shouldn’t be here but its quite easy to put a reference to some MMO. Just take a glance at my one. Would have been better if it wasn’t referenced off another work. But pwnsome all the same.
But then again, it’s all from the mind so +1 for imagination and adaptation.
Oh and for those who remember mine, I submitted it for my school’s writing competition. Kinda glad that I didn’t win. (It would have been read out at assembly or something >_< )
~Lily x33.
*HATE CARS*
Let me give you an advice, hope you don’t take offense though, as I’m kinda clueless on the kind of public this site attracts.
Do never, ever write a story and expect it’s sad without depth in characters. I know people’s standards may differ from mine, but I can say this left me cold, as the I-person and Clarissa are practically empty shells to me, the reader in this case. If this were in a book format, it’d be around 2 pages, the pages to get to know a character is nothing.
A male had a diary?
At first I thought this narrator person was a woman o.o
And I was saying:
WTF GAY
What I like or not doesn’t matter
Rules do
Do never, ever write a story and expect it’s sad without depth in characters. I know people’s standards may differ from mine, but I can say this left me cold, as the I-person and Clarissa are practically empty shells to me, the reader in this case. If this were in a book format, it’d be around 2 pages, the pages to get to know a character is nothing.”
This is just a short story, you dont need to describe the characters so, well deeply when the acual story is only 2 or so pages long.
lol i dont know how to quote, so yeah. lol its alright, i dont take any offense in any suggestions. haha yup, corny stuff ^^;
And okay, If i make a story non-related, i’ll add at least 5 sentences of mmo stuff in it
I think something like this was posted before, waaaay back in the early days of MMOt.
And it was flamed so badly.
Hm.
Do never, ever write a story and expect it’s sad without depth in characters. I know people’s standards may differ from mine, but I can say this left me cold, as the I-person and Clarissa are practically empty shells to me, the reader in this case. If this were in a book format, it’d be around 2 pages, the pages to get to know a character is nothing.”
True. I felt the same way =/