Hey guys this is my first narrative seen by more than 5 people (teacher, 2 people who sit next to me, person behind me and the random nerd) This is my first so feel free to flame and say stuff
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I was a warrior. I had fame, I had fortune, I had love. I could do many things. I could oblitirate Balrogs. I could outrun Dark Pepes. But one thing i couldn’t do was keep my love, and another is that i can’t stand life. I dont.
Striding through the barren lands of Perion in a effort to get to Ellinea. At dawn i set off and at noon i finnaly see the trees, the cool welcoming shade of Ellinia. Finally arriving at Ellinia i look towards the sky.
I could almost laugh to myself if i wasn’t so depressed. What happened to Drake?, The Warrior, The Ruthless, The One Who Cared Nothing Of Others. Now im doing this for something I couldn’t keep. Im doing this for love. My last breath for love. Then so be it.
I climb high. On the highest tree. To the Highest Branch. To a place where i can take my last breath. To a place where this all ends. To death. I reach the top, tears pouring.
Me: (shouting) So it ends like this huh?
I write a last note:
This is the end. For love. Hope your all happy. I lost almost everything, but now i will lose everything.
~Drake
I jump. Feeling the air against my skin.
*Flash Back*
Me:*smiling*Hey Jen
Jen: Hey Drake *blushes*
Me: So watcha wanna do today?
Jen: Wanna explore this new place? I heard my frined talk about it on our way to Kerning.
Me: Sure why not?, my sword is pratically calling for adventure.
*ends*
I think,: when we were still friends, the time of happiness. How suprising i think of that in my last second. Its gonna come any minute.
Thanks this is my first ever narrative that more than 5 people read. Flame or congradulate. Suggestions welcome =)
you spelled a town name wrong
Ellinia*
lol. Not as great as the 2nd one. ><
Oh well, Hope you carry on from chapter two. (yes, i read chappie 2 before this)