This may be the last episode i write for the puplic, depending on its success. This, unlike episode 6 and 7 is an action based episode. Enjoy
~I fell, covered in darkness, an unknown distance, with my arm streatched outwards, thinking I could somehow go back to the light. Without success. I landed, not hard enough to do any physical damage, but I still got the wind knocked right out of me. I sat up, grabbing my chest, trying to find air. I focussed all me energy into finding the first breath of air. After the minor, yet pain staking task, I observed my surroundings with my, now adapted, eyes. The room, if you could call it that, was a darkish purple, with what looked like, a shaft straigh opposite of me.
On the ground, there was a mat, probably filled with straw. Since there was no immediate exit, and I was extremly interested in this theif guild, I decided to go on my hands and knees into the vent shaft. I’ve always been terribly afraid of tight spaces, but tight spaces in the dark was even worst. I was emotionally shaken but decided to press on, humming a song that my motehr used to sing me. Thinking of my mother, my eyes started swelling with tears again. I quickly swept them away with my sleeve and continued in the shaft.
Aproaching light emerged after what seemed like minuites in the dark closed space. With new motivation, i crawled faster towards the light. As I crawled out of the shaft, I found myself in a new room, with a neon light, pointing to my left side, on the ceiling. I decided that that was the direction I should go, but the only problem was that it pointed to a grey brick wall.
I touched the bricks, they were rough and cut my knuckles when i swept over them with the back of my hand. I exclaimed, pulling my hand back, and kicking my foot out, as a reflex. I heard a stone on stone grind and Ignored me hand to look up. What I saw was the entire brick wall, breaking in two, and sliding apart. I covered my eyes, blinded by the breaking light from the center of the wall.
After adjusting, again, to the light, I noticed a small four leged pink beast on the empty room. It turned to face me, bearing white tusks and showing its teeth. I heard a growl, as it started to bound towards me, tusks forward. It wasn’t going to stop. Me, alone again, facing something difficult
But one big difference this time.
I was completly unarmed…
~~~Relation: They should ahve a test to get your first job.. It’s too easy…~~~
nooooooooooooooo keep writing i love ur stories
Nice story! However, you overuse your commas just a bit. ^^;;
I’m looking forward to future entries!
~Mip
thaat was so cool plz dont stop
Lol, the commas are for effect >.<, I like to have pauses,
This is a suspense style story.
LOL this one is pretty good solo, keep writin ^__^
hmmm, action? id rather say an adventure type story, w/e o.o
and wow, i was gonna post my own story but i have lost motivation even after i finished part I, part iii and part iv
i still need to do the into (yes i no the order is funky but w/e)
you suck at writing you’re just jealous of anbu