A story, based in the future.

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This a story. Straight off the bat, thats what I want to write on this website, and I want it to be good. This is the intorduction to that story. Right now, I only have a vague idea of the plot line, and know not of a name to fit it.

Heres that vague plot:

Time: Near future

Setting: World of maplestory (what else)

General outline: A middle aged man, working for a company, that’s simple enough. This company however, has a greater purpose then what is revealed on the surface, and is bent on achieving this purpose. The story will be filled with plot twists, cover-ups, decite, lies, and of course, action. The whole time being shrouded by intelligence.

Disclaimer: (early on) The story, though based in the world of ‘MapleStory’ is not associated with it, Wizet or NX Games in any way, shape or form. The story, characters, but not the settings, belongs to the writer, Myself, known as Sirsolo.

I’m not original in that form, and don’t flame me for it not being perfect. (read above.. if you didn’t get what i was talking about just now) But basicly, don’t copy me.

I’m aiming at a general age of 15+, but it is not LIMITED to that age.

I’m hoping on its success, and will gudge on comments.

P.S. Send ideas of titles.. becuase I’m lost.. and possibly, a company name >.>

Thanks
~Sirsolo

11 thoughts on “A story, based in the future.”

  1. What do you mean “the whole time being shrouded in intelligence”? Do you mean that the piece will be well writen or something else I am not seeing. If you mean that the story will be writen well, I can already tell you it will not. You have no concept of punctuation or sentence structure, and already show a limited care for correction of misspellings.

    Please enlighten me on what “shrouded in intelligence” means, because I have no idea.

    P.S. what the hell is the deal with the disclaimer? That seriously is so moot it is stupid to even say anything about it.

  2. AlterOfGod said: “What do you mean “the whole time being shrouded in intelligence”? Do you mean that the piece will be well writen or something else I am not seeing. If you mean that the story will be writen well, I can already tell you it will not. You have no concept of punctuation or sentence structure, and already show a limited care for correction of misspellings.

    Please enlighten me on what “shrouded in intelligence” means, because I have no idea.

    P.S. what the hell is the deal with the disclaimer? That seriously is so moot it is stupid to even say anything about it.”

    You have such a big stick up your ass, you kight as well call yourself jesus christ and go crucify yourself, because as long as people can read it, its fine by me. And trust me, I’m A LOT smarter then other people. And also, try to use a little big of imagination into finding out what shrouded by intelligence means. It should be obvious, but that stick may be poking at your brain right about now.

  3. sirsolo said: “

    AlterOfGod said: “What do you mean “the whole time being shrouded in intelligence”? Do you mean that the piece will be well writen or something else I am not seeing. If you mean that the story will be writen well, I can already tell you it will not. You have no concept of punctuation or sentence structure, and already show a limited care for correction of misspellings.

    Please enlighten me on what “shrouded in intelligence” means, because I have no idea.

    P.S. what the hell is the deal with the disclaimer? That seriously is so moot it is stupid to even say anything about it.”

    You have such a big stick up your ass, you kight as well call yourself jesus christ and go crucify yourself, because as long as people can read it, its fine by me. And trust me, I’m A LOT smarter then other people. And also, try to use a little big of imagination into finding out what shrouded by intelligence means. It should be obvious, but that stick may be poking at your brain right about now.”

    Sirsolo, this time I will side with Alter. *gasp* For once!

    I too find it difficult to comprehend what “shrouded by intelligence’ means. If literally, it means you are surronded by intelligence, which makes no sense at all, even if it is symbolic, unless the guy is a genuis and is surrounded by smart people o.O

    And, you should be able to handle some critiism, because you will never improve at all. Critism might be harsh, but in the end, they strengthen you. If you are one of those thick-headed people I once was, think of it this way: I shall improve to prove them wrong that my story sucked.

    ~Shatred, here to make MMOTale stories a better read.

  4. Alright, that guy isnt giving me critism at all. Critism should help, hes just being an overall d!ck

    OK, SHROUDED BY INTELLIGENCE MEANS THAT INTELLIGENCE WILL PLAY A BIG ROLE, IT WONT BE IDIOTIC OR BARBARIC, NO ‘I ATTACKING HIM WITH ME SWORD, IT HIT HIM, MAKING HIM BLEED’

    So a smart read, Ill get into detail like crazy.

    Silvers writing is like mine, and you’ll see when I make the story,

  6. That has to do with what?

    And anyways, I will, the last blog I wrote got deleted because my browser when back a page, before I submited it, And it’ll go through editing with my friend.

  8. Whoa, really, I’ve never heard of something with such a small name that could do TWO WHOLE THINGS! (Im being smartass/sarcastic)

  9. I don’t know. Alter likes being non-conformist. It would have been better for you, sirsolo, to have just accepted his critcism and explain yourself instead of flaming back. Chill.
    And a small tip: Select All and Copy when updating next time. Then when the webpage crashes or something, you’ll still have backup.

  10. The story will be filled with plot twists, cover-ups, decite, lies, and of course, action. The whole time being shrouded by intelligence.
    just like indescanes “bandits sin”

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