Well i got tired of my long title and i feel like copying my good pal TKPenguin and abbreviate my title. But after a while i figured nah, cause well ya know the title will be called S.O.B! lol kk on to the next story (please read the other stories to know whats happening).
As soon as SteelSin and Ken arrived to Ludibrium, their sensei gave them a new and very difficult quest.
Sensei: Your new quest is to level to 70 and become master hermits, but there is a time limit for this quest, the time limit is half a month. I know this will be diffi-
SteelSin: WHAT?! become hermits in half a month??! thats like a lupin eating a apple! ITS IMPOSSIBLE!
Ken: Not quite my old friend. I have heard rumors about a monster that has immense powers, and it would give all its power to who ever kills it.
SteelSin: I guess we have a chance. But we don’t even know if this monster exists!
Sensei: Oh, it exists all right… its the guardian of all the maplers in maplestory. Its half demon half angel, it was born from hell and heaven, he was the guardian of victoria island until his demon side consumed him. People haven’t seen this monster, but many have said he looks like the crimson balrog, but its wings are white as snow and its teeth as deadly as hell. The clan leaders have tried to capture it, and make it the guardian of maple again, but they all have failed and had lost many comrades in the process. But maybe this new clan “avengers” might convince it to join their clan?. I was ordered by all the clan leaders to tell you guys to take care of this beast, and maybe level in the slaughter.
SteelSin: Well LETS GO! [Sharpening Ilbis]
Ken: Well were gonna head off now, see ya sensei.
They both got back on the ship to Orbis and headed back to victoria island.
——————–Few days later (they arrive to victoria)———————
They both stepped out of the ship, knowing something had changed…..
SteelSin: Something looks different here…
Ken: Uh huh…..
The whole station was covered with dark snow…
SteelSin: This place looks like El Nath, except the snow is black….
Ken: This might be a event, lets go around victoria and check this out.
SteelSin [shakey voice]: Sure.
They both ran out of ellinia station, they looked around depressed and knowing the glossy natural ellinia had turned into hell and probally the entire victoria. They searched for people, but they found none.
Ken: HEY, lets go see if the clan leaders are here.
SteelSin: LETS GO!
They decided to find Dark Lord first, so they took their nearest town scrolls and teleported to Kerning City. They stepped in the pub, and found some slaughtered warriors.
SteelSin: What in maple jesus happened here?!
Ken: Wait, do you hear that?
(ting ting)
SteelSin: It sound like… the ping of daggers? no wait it sounds like a sword.. wait no it sounds like swords.
SteelSin quickly ran outside. Stars were flying all about. It was the Dark Lord. He was fighting some warriors. SteelSin took out his slain and slid it on. He jumped into the battle and threw several lucky sevens at the warriors. The warriors used their shields and deflected them. SteelSin looked at there shields, it had a weird mark.
SteelSin: HEY, isnt that mark from the avengers clan?!
The warriors quickly ran.
SteelSin: Commander are you ok?
Dark Lord [aka Commander]: Yes, i’m fine.
Ken: What happened here?
Dark Lord: We were attacked by the avengers.
SteelSin: What?! the avengers attacked?!
Dark Lord: They had many recruits, many of us died and some are still battling in Perion.
SteelSin: We better start planning our strade-
But before SteelSin could finish his sentence a dark figure from above the sky casted a long shadow arcoss Kerning city.
Dark Lord: Its back….
To Be Continued
omg i think its the winged balrog O.o
dude make the next story quick i wanna read it!
nice keeping up the suspence lol
I have a suspicion that you are making mule accounts to get yourself on the front page.
Particularly: sh00k39, Kinyushi, Maple145, Rick87 (and maybe ken39)
Because none of those accounts have ANY character written under them, they only comment and like EVERY single one of your blogs.
Please stop this immediately, and try to get people to like your blogs the FAIR way.
~Mip
(P.S: Actually I have proof of this. One of Ken39’s blogs label that he is indeed SteeliSin. However, SteeliSin is labeled on THIS account as a character of his own. Therefore, we know he’s using at least ONE account to like himself, but I think it’s safe to assume the rest aswell.)
I think its the monster whos half angel and half demon
Mip has a point
Particularly: sh00k39, Kinyushi, Maple145, Rick87 (and maybe ken39)
Because none of those accounts have ANY character written under them, they only comment and like EVERY single one of your blogs.
Please stop this immediately, and try to get people to like your blogs the FAIR way.
~Mip
(P.S: Actually I have proof of this. One of Ken39’s blogs label that he is indeed SteeliSin. However, SteeliSin is labeled on THIS account as a character of his own. Therefore, we know he’s using at least ONE account to like himself, but I think it’s safe to assume the rest aswell.)”
Mip, sheesh, I can tell you already that ken39 is not one of Will’s mule accounts. Ken is the name of Will’s brother, and he also plays Will’s account every once in a while. Please stop making false accusations.
As for the other accounts, they’re just regular dudes. Mip, please stop being paranoid and think things the normal way. You’re not the only writer here, ya know -_-. Lay off Will!
Anyway, nice story Will. Make the next one a bit longer though! Keep it up!
Feh, even if it is, I really don’t trust things like that. I’m aware I’m not the only writer, very aware, however, if they are regular dudes, then please tell me, why do they only comment and like this person’s blogs?
I’m not being paranoid, it’s only too good to be true. ^_^
~Mip
Well, we have buddies in-game whom we showed this site to. They’ve just joined, and Will told ’em to check out his stories, first. For example, there’s som1else, AKA Jeremy. Sh00k is a guildmate who recently joined, Kinyushi is KengstaA, another guildmate, Maple145 is our buddy Aidan (whom we know in real life), and finally, Rick87 is Elisa’s bro (Elisa is another person whom we know in real life). And I already explained about ken. So there! TKPenguin, comin’ atcha! =D
Not too shabby. I’d just suggest you get them to start doing something, because 5 likes all in a row in the first 15 minutes in the same order every single time leads me to believe he logs into these accounts to like himself. ^^;;
~Mip
I talked to ’em in-game today, and encouraged them to write something so paranoid peeps won’t be pointing fingers.
Their response? Generally, something along the lines of: “my grammer suks, too lazy”
Oh yeah, Ken just changed the name of the dude in his story to avoid any more confusion (just noticed).
No, no no noooo, what I meant was.
How is it that ALL five like one after another within the first 15 minutes and always in the same order?
Unless they all are on at the same time always, and they always like it one after another, always in the same order, then I find this hard to believe.
~Mip
(No, I have nothing agains’t ya’ll. I just don’t think it’s fair. At all.)
Hehe, we’re soooo bumping this story. But anyways, since we kinda ya know, KNOW them in real life, we told them to check this site out after school (or at school). As for the two guildmates, they just ctrl alt delete’d out and checked out the story. So basically, Willy is getting lots of likes, but not by himself.
I’ve decided just to edit this instead of constantly bumping the post, which is kinda dumb.
Whatever, I guess you can think what you want. *Takes off boxing gloves* soooo uh yeah, fight over.
Eh, I can hear the background noise, ‘Fight fight fight!’
DDD
But anywho, I still don’t believe it, and until I see proof otherwise, I won’t believe it.
~Mip
um, guys. I agree with Mip. but ill add more to this argument xP
Having a buncha friends boost up your ratings is still the same as boosting it up yourself. This is due to the fact that your friend’s critique on the story is most of the time, invalid. WHy? Cuz their your friends, DUH!
I only have one friend who boosts up my blog ratings. It’s light dark, however, he only does it to the ones he likes.
Next time, try to get your rating up the legit way. Write something that captures someone heart or mind.
(although it is more of a teleplay style copied from chris)