Its a fan. She reached out to touch the long, rectangular object nestled in the long, rectangular box. Her black eyes were full of puzzlement, as they darted upwards to look at the man who had presented it to her.
Yes, he said simply. He did not smile. He never did, not in all the months she knew him; to do so just wasnt him. He held the narrow box now in two hands, the boxs lid dangling by its edge from the hooked index finger on his right hand. Its for you.
She raised a dark eyebrow. You said you were going to get me a weapon when I levelled up, not a womans accessory.
Take it and see. He shrugged and pushed the box closer. He shifted a little, his chainmail clinking as he did. She always wondered at how he could bear wearing that heavy armour all the time, but the weight of all the solid steel links hanging from the warriors shoulders never did seem to bother or hinder him. Very little did, she knew. Dont you trust me?
She returned an identical shrug and picked up the fan. She almost dropped it in her surprise, for she had not expected it to be so heavy. The closed fan was about as long as her forearm, and a cool silk tassel dangled from a thick silk cord threaded through the rivet at the fans head. Sandwiched between the thick guards of dark polished wood were precise folds of lacquered paper, and thin steel ribs that extended beyond the paper.
She looked at it in fascination, turning it in her right hand. It was indeed nowhere near a womans accessory. Decorative fans tended not to possess cruel, razor-sharp points at the end of their ribs. The steel of the fans ribs and sticks flashed blue when she raised it to the light; it was good quality steel, and explained the fans weight.
Open it. At his command, she opened up the fan reverently with both hands. The lacquered paper cracked a little as the fans leaf unfolded, revealing a circle painted in the centre of it, symmetrical halves of red and blue separated by a sigmoid curve on a pale yellow background. The sharp ends of the ribs fanned open in a wicked half-circle of deadliness above the paper, glinting pale blue along their edges in the light.
Oh. She was speechless. Her hand was getting used to the dense weight of the fan, and she found that it was not encumbering at all, as she had first believed it. In fact, it was perfect, the length of steel ribs comfortably counter-balanced by the weight of the steel sticks that met in the fans head. She could easily snap it open and close in one hand, and did so a few times, marvelling at the smoothness at which the sticks moved over each other.
I knew you would like it. His voice was pleased, smug even.
She felt like rolling her eyes at his tone, but refrained from it. A gift of an excellent weapon like this did not deserve ungratefulness or discourtesy. Thank you.
Now lets see you at work with it.
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A one shot, pure descriptive piece. Does this count as a blog then?
I was half inspired by the deadly fan weapon as featured in Tamora Pierces Protector of the Small series. The other half came from a good Maple buddy of mine. He gave me a Korean fan too, but he wasnt a warrior and he always, always smiled.
This is dedicated to you, Crazyberry. Thanks for being there for your Jie. Been missing you.
Very good description.
I always wondered how you would opoen that fan really quickly, like Maplers do.
Nice blog!
~~~~Pirkid~~~~
That was cute :3 I enjoyed it a lot <33
Hee hee, I wish I had gotten into your series if I knew that it was fifty chapters of this <3
ahah indigo, her stories rock. I spend 3 days reading parts 1-3X. They were simply amazing.
Silver, your writing amazes me.
Swuiff! 😀
Je t’aime.
Yes, spiffy quite. I too like the Korean fan, though can’t see how useful it would be for BlastMage. xD
I only spent a day reading parts 1-(fourty something I think it was?), I couldn’t stop! *cracks up*
VERCHIEL FTW!
-Munky
Awesome. Tamora Pierce’s fans were cool. What were they called?
Awesome. Tamora Pierce’s fans were cool. What were they called?
sweeet very nice description.
I can’t remember what Tamore Pierce’s fans were called. But I do remember that they could slice through wooden rods just like *snaps fingers* that. Deadly weapon for a noblewoman.
Ehehe. I’d give a lifetime’s supply of cookies to those who started to read Aurora’s Redemption knowing that there are forty odd chapters to begin with: you have patience far beyond mine 😀
U gave me a slight shock about the ‘jie’. That’s like what my parents use to call me.
Those Tamora Pierce fans are Shi-something, I think. xD Aargh. I feel embarrassed. I should know; it’s the same word in Japanese. But I forgot. >_>
Anyway, COOL ONE SHOT! <3 I love your stories and your style of writing. ^^
@repty: Lol. That Jie refers to ‘Elder Sister’ in Chinese. Your name has ‘jie’ in it?
Yes. My name is er. . . I think I’ll tell you in email.
nice one. used to follow pierce’s series till i stopped library-ing. you’re good at weaving stories. THUMBS UP
I went home and looked it up in Squire (it was bugging me). The deadly fans are called shukusen.