¤ Enough Hate
Hmm. Grendel peered down at the facsimile pages, scanning through Salmers account quickly. Fascinating.
Strange, isnt it? Silver asked from the comfortable armchair she was sitting in, looking up from the open pages of her journal. Right after they finished reading the pages Solomon had sent them, Silver had dragged Jaysen, to his everlasting and loudly-proclaimed despair, all the way up to Grendels office in yet another lift pod ride, bursting with questions for the old wizard. If Wing was aiming for the Fire Sentinel, why would the spell deflect to the girl?
It would be logical. It might sound strange, but the girl seems to be in a condition of greater memory loss, relative to the Sentinel. It would be like the case of more heat going into colder objects, or that of how water always flows from the highest point to the lowest. Grendel explained, stroking his long grey beard as he thought. Does that make sense to you?
So the memory spell recognised the greater memory loss in the girl, and then worked to reverse it in her, preferring her over the Sentinel originally targeted? Silver continued, tapping her pen against her chin. Yes, that sounds logical. She started to scribble in her journal.
You were always a fast learner, Silver. Grendel smiled proudly.
Silver laughed. How else would I have caught your attention during my apprenticeship, great O Grendel?
Jaysen finally felt well enough to speak up, and obeyed the urge to revenge himself on Silver for making him take the lift ride. You would excuse me, sir, but I always had this impression that Lady Silver there somehow terrorised you into becoming her mentor.
Ah, finally someone guesses at the terrible truth. Grendel chuckled. I dont suppose you know how to reverse the damage on my old brain that the torture caused, young man?
Unfortunately not, Grendel sir. But you have my sympathies, sir. Jaysen said solemnly, returning the death glare that Silver shot him with a triumphant grin.
Im terribly sorry, Grendel, but you will have to bear with the torture for a while longer. Silver decided to cut in now, before the situation got out of hand. Ida said that you knew something about the spell that keeps her name unspeakable. Could you tell me more about how the spell works?
Ah yes. The spell. Grendel leaned back in his chair behind his desk, his knobby fingers tapping the side of his nose as he thought. It is actually more of a ritual with multiple stages. The first stage involves the severance of all ties the victims spirit has with this mortal plane, the second the magical binding of the victims memory and the third the confinement of both memory and spirit to a compressed space in the ethereal plane.
Sounds painful, Grendel sir. Jaysen contributed helpfully.
Grendels voice was as grave as his wrinkled face as he looked at Jaysen. It is as painful as it sounds, young man. For the spell to succeed, the spellcaster needs to perform the incantation over the victims newly dead body, so that the victims spirit is completely unaware of and unable to fight the severance, binding and confinement.
Newly dead. Grendels words hung in the silent room now. So you will have to kill the person to cast the spell? Silver knew the answer, but couldnt stop herself from whispering the question in her disbelief.
Grendel nodded slowly. The spellcaster needs a lot of hate to carry out the spell from its gory beginning to vindictive end. Enough hate to wish to wipe the existence of the victim completely off the face of this world.
Who could hate her so much? Jaysen mused, looking over in Silvers direction.
The huntress gave him a look of dry amusement. You forgot Hedwig, havent you.
Oh yeah. Jaysen scratched at his head through his Silver Identitys cloth. How could I forget Her Frigidness, especially after the time she tried to kill us by sending us to the Gardens of Darkness. Sure, I think shes evil enough to have cast the spell.
Then again, theres Wing. Silver pondered aloud, tugging at her own silver curls. The way he looked so angry when we asked him about you-know-who, things must not have gone well between her and Wing.
The question is, how did what not go well?
Who knows? Perhaps Salmers journal might tell us more. Silver shrugged, and looked down at her own journal, where she had scrawled the words binding of spirit. Something nagged at her, and she felt as if she had forgotten an important question that she wanted to ask Grendel.
Just then, Grendel spoke up again. There is one other thing, Silver. I have studied the rare instances in which the spell was used, but I find something peculiar in this girls case. You are merely unable to speak the name of this girl, is it not?
Yes. Silver nodded, a slight frown on her brow now. You find something peculiar?
Indeed. The spell, as I know it, not only bans the articulation of a name by all, but also erases the memory of the name from the minds of people who did not know the person before the spell was cast. The spell would also prevent the name from registering in said people, or even allowing the name to be recognised by them, whether in the verbal or the written form.
But we can write, read and remember her name Silver ran a finger along the black Drake leather of her glove, thinking. Something went wrong with the spell?
Spells of this nature usually wear off as time passes, but it seems impossible that the strength of the spell will wane within the mere space of half a century. Grendel reached for the staff leaning against his chair and stood up with a drawn-out breath, planting his staff firmly on the ground to support himself. He walked slowly out from behind the desk, stroking his floor-length beard. So, there is reason to believe that the spellcaster could have made a mistake during the incantation. The memory of the girl is not bound as securely as it ought to have been, and the girls spirit might not have been contained properly.
Binding of spirit. Silver looked down at her journal again, flipping the pages back to her prior entries about her dreams. A sudden thought came to her. Then, she ventured tentatively, ‘Is there anyway we can get to the ethereal plane and contact the spirit?
The portals to the ethereal plane arent tangible, child. Grendel said gently, as he examined a tall bookshelf from where he stood before it. But it is possible that one can reach them through complex magical rituals. The occasional dreamer can also stumble upon a portal unwittingly, but that has been rarely recorded.
Dreams again? Silver rubbed at the creases on her forehead, her head starting to ache a little. If the spirit is slowly escaping its confinement, can it contact anyone on the mortal plane then?
Only if there is a connection for it to follow. Grendel made a gesture, and a book floated down from a shelf that was just out of his reach. He turned to Silver, book hovering at his shoulder. For example, it could be an anchor of sorts that can lead the spirit along to the mortal plane, like the calling of the spirits name. Or if the spirit has a strong enough will, it can fight its own way out of the ethereal plane.
Either way, it is difficult, for both the spirit to escape the ethereal, and for us to reach past the mortal plane. Grendel waved the thick volume over to where Silver sat. This might help you.
Silver plucked the book gently out of the air, and took a look at its cover. She looked up at the old wizard immediately, all thoughts on her Project now chased away by incredulous surprise. Cant you continue to be serious for a few more minutes, Grendel? she scolded him as if scolding a child.
I am. Grendel put on an affronted expression that was somehow comical on his bearded, wrinkled face. I am as serious as Master Solomon on this. You need to relax sometimes, Silver.
Serious about what? Jaysen craned his neck to see what Silver had received from Grendel.
This. Only the bandits quick reflexes saved him from the fate of being thwaped in the face by the book Silver tossed to him as she unfolded herself from her armchair. She went over to Grendels desk to gather up the facsimile pages of Salmers journal. Thank you so much anyway, Grendel, for your help. But I dont think I need that book. She made a face at Grendel, before walking briskly out of the room.
Hey, wait for me! Dont leave me lost in this maze, cruel lady! Jaysen stood up to chase after Silver, but not before taking a quick look at the book that had nearly flattened his face. Tooled in gold leaf on smooth, green Necki leather, the title of the book read, One Thousand and One Maple Jokes for the Stressed.
¤ Speculation
Back at floor seven, quarter three, section eleven, Silver continued to read through the books and scrolls there. Her journal lay open next to her on the table, together with the loose facsimile pages of Salmers journal. She was alone, Jaysen having no choice but to leave her. The bandit still had no idea how to navigate the complicated maze of corridors that made up the residential wings of the Ellinia Library and needed to follow Rei back to his room. Silver welcomed the solitude anyway; she didnt mind having some time to herself right now.
Even as she scanned through pages of words and diagrams in the lamplight, her grey eyes were starting to tire, telling her that it had been a long day; the sun had set over Ellinia and the usual hush in the Library was falling into dead silence as librarians finished up their duties and retired to their living quarters for the night.
Silver pushed away the book she was reading and sighed. There was precious little information that she could find about the Academy or King Kranz and the next instalment of Salmers restored journal would most probably only be available the next day. All this meant that there was plenty of space for speculation, and speculated Silver did.
For one, what did the spell make Aurora remember about her past? Silver rifled through the facsimile pages to Auroras strange exclamation about herself being an Advisor. She had read up on the role of Advisors in the fairy court of Orbis, but other than one vaguely mentioned exception, it seemed like most of the fairies appointed to that position were fairy men of middle age by fairy reckoning. Was Aurora just hallucinating, her mind distorted by the rogue spell, or was it the truth?
And what did Aurora do that made her fall out with Wing and made Wing hate her so much? Do you believe that someone, who would make use of someone who loves her and then plot his downfall and disgrace to gain success, can possibly be someone who does great deeds? Wings harsh words rang in Silvers mind. Salmers journal revealed that Wing and Aurora had been together; Wing must be referring to himself as the someone.
I know exactly how that feels. Silver sighed again, as she rested her head on the table, her forehead pressed against the black leather of the glove that concealed her scars. And if Im so reluctant to even think about it, surely it would be more difficult to make Wing tell me about what happened.
Her eyes drooped, as weariness caught up with her now. Before she surrendered to the dark waves of sleep, her last thoughts were about her strange dreams and what Grendel had said about dreamers walking the ethereal plane. What if ?
A tall muscular figure in blue robes came into view, padding noiselessly to Silvers side at where she slept at the table. The lamplight revealed it to be Brandon, his coal-black eyes glinting in the lamps warm glow. For a moment, he watched Silver sleep, her long silver curls spilling over her arms onto the table as her breathing deepened into the steady pattern of slumber. Then, he reached out a calloused hand to touch Silvers right elbow gently; she flinched and shifted a little, but did not wake.
Settling himself down quietly on the chair next to her, Brandon watched Silver for a while more, to make sure she was asleep. Just like the good old days, Silver. You and me, alone in the Library at night. Only, you were more awake and more interesting back then, if you get what I mean. A small smile on his lips, Brandon picked up Silvers journal from where she had left it on the table and started to read through it, learning everything that Silver had recorded about her current Project.
Once he finished reading, he shut the book with one hand, the satisfied smile on his lips becoming a little wider. Im disappointed though, dear Silver. Your Project doesnt seem to have the same potential your last one had. At least its one less rival in the competition for me to worry about.
Dont worry though. Ill still make an effort to get to you, Silver. You dont know how beautiful you look when you are angry and upset all at the same time. Sliding the book back to its original position, Brandon stood up to go, his smile practically a smirk now. He leant down to Silvers face, close enough to see every dark eyelash on her closed eyelids. I wish I could see your reaction if you wake up now, and find me this close to you.
As if she heard him, Silver shifted again, a frown appearing on her face.
But that wouldnt be fun enough, would it. Ill be seeing you soon then, my Silver. With that, Brandon finally left the sleeping girl alone, disappearing out of sight and into the shadows amongst the deserted shelves of floor seven, quarter three.
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^___________^ My Major Exams are OVER! I’M BACK! XD
That is, until my Major MAJOR exams come around.
Wait, what Major MAJOR exams? *whistles*
I’m working on another story now, already half-way through it, in fact, and I’m having too much fun to stop. It’s a Maple fanfic, but it’s a short story. Its softcopy is already up to five pages. Nowhere near the length of Aurora’s Redemption, of course, but it does present a conundrum.
Do I break the story up into a few chapters to post it, or just chuck the will-soon-be-roughly ten pages of words into one blog? The first sounds really strange, because a short story doesn’t usually have chapters, and the latter is only to cater to people who like to go ‘ZOMG LOLX long blogz sh0rt PL0X.’ And of course, to prevent my readers from getting headaches.
Guide me, almighty reader!
Since I’m in such a high mood, I want a chocolate-chip-choco-chunk-mocha-chip-almond-cream-hazelnut cookie~! *runs off to Maple*
[Edit] Changed the capitalisation error. Thanks, AlterofGod.
First to ‘like’ it! Thanks to Indigo for telling me you’ve posted a new chappie. Thanks, Lain!
Love this story!~ Hehe, Brandon sounds like he’s trouble. T___T That’s bad.
I think you should break your mini story up into little chapters for your readers, because some people don’t like long blogs all that much and that would lose you some of the readers you have. T_____T And we don’t want that.
I want one of your cookies too! Gimme, please? ^_________^
I’d rather have one long blog cause I hate suspense, but I spose if a lot of people go “omg long blog omgzers”, you can just break it up.
*sigh* I wish my writer’s block would blow away.
GL withh your story. I prefer the LONG version though. I hate suspense.
YAY! You’re back! *Does happy-dance*
The suspense is KILLING me! I wanna find out what happens next! *Dies of suspense, while still dancing*
I can’t wait to read your mini story too! =D
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Wow. This is really bad. Besides the horrible punctuation and terrible misuse of dialoge, the story does not show anything at all. You have very short parts that do not illuminate the characters actions. You just shortly, and rather crudely, tell fragments of actions. A reader does not know at all what is happened, save the dotted line that he is to follow to get to the end of the story. You need MUCH more elaboration. This needs a lot of work. It just seems that people click the “like” button without even reading, as no one said this before or even commented. Generally, you want more comments then likes. You should really work on your stories to improve them.
I should really write a story. It would be scary how good it is. . .
plz dont stretch the page ><
WB SILVER! Those 2 weeks sure were long. But nothing on Silver’s past! RAWR!
Nonetheless, an amazing read.
gujju ♥
Alter, silver has a very captivating story, and to realy get her story, you have to real all 42 chapters, and then judge. (If you have, disregard what i said)
Compared to most stories on this site, the grammer, punctuation and such is amazing.
Alter, you think you’re the best, don’t cha? THERE’S A THING CALLED MODESTY IN THIS WORLD!
Dont stretch the dam page you noob
omg, i can’t read this now, cause some IDIOTIC PERSON had to stretch the freakin page! @^$*&(%^$%^*&(!
eh, i’ll try anyway. . .
EDIT:
yay! i finished reading it IN REGULAR FORMAT w/o that idiot stretching the page! ^_^ (i refreshed the page, and clicked stop right b4 the page finished loading when the text is all normal)
Thanks for the comments, Alter. I’m pretty aware of the fact that I withhold a lot of the plot in my chapters, and I was worrying that it might be a little too much, the whole ‘keep the suspense’ business. Comes from having the plot replaying and replaying in my head over and over again; the line between vague hints and outright plot development sort of blurs. Coupled with my habit of thinking in large chunks of words, it’s practically a recipe for boredom. Thank you for pointing that out.
My language is not fantastic, I admit; there is always room for improvement. I won’t even bother to use the excuse that English isn’t my first language, and I’m too old to use the ‘I’m only 10!’ one. Unfortunately, precisely because of my age, I seem to have hit a plateau of sorts and I find it difficult to rise above that. It’s frustrating. :/ But yes, I’ll keep that in mind when I write next time.
As for the misuse of dialogue, unless I work telepathic spells into the story, I don’t think I can help it. My characters need to talk and communicate with each other because when they don’t, it will change the plot. But it is true that this chapter has too much dialogue. I needed to use Grendel’s voice as to explain magic spells; who better than the best mage in Victoria to do that?
Write a story, Alter. I sincerely wish to read it and see an example of a good story.
On other matters: What is SAQF?
Wow. . .Silver. I am so sorry. First of all, English as your second launguage? Fantastic. You are an example to us all. Secondly. . .TEN! You are a fantastic writer for you age. You haev to realize, dear, that I am seventeen and have three english classes. When you get to my age, this stuff just will not pass as even acceptable. I hope you see where I am coming from, and I am sorry that I sounded presumptuous. You just have to realize that I figured you to be my equal (17 and a very mature writer). Once again, I am sorry dear.
Now that that is out of the way: you completely misunderstood what I ment by dialoge. You can have all the dialoge you want, sweety. You just need to realize how to write it correctly. Allow me to explain in the best way possible: when writing dialoge, always remeber the first word of the dialoge, regardless of whether or not it is the first word in the actual sentence, must be capitalized. Besides that, when using dialoge, you must separate speakers. You cannot have two of the same speakers in the same paragraph. When you get to the new speaker, make a new paragraph. I know this may seem weird, it did to me when I was in 6th grade, but if you read novels, you will notice that it is done this way.
Well, I hope this helped. If you need any more help, just read a book. When I was first introduced to dialoge, my teacher used a book as a visual aid. It really helps.
P.S. keep up the good work. By the time you are my age, you will be a fantastic writer for sure.
Oh, and after making such a bold statement, I will back it up. I will begin writing a story, and inform you to when I get it done. Oh, and by the way, storys are my forte. I suck at poety, which is why I am trying so hard. This story will be very good, I assure you. And I will make it good just for you.
Okee-dokee. All done. Only took me 20 minutes also >.>