Hi, I just joined MMO Tales.
I looked around, and saw some great poems. I decided to share my own.
Name: It’s all about You
I’m sick of your attitude,
Putting up with you everyday.
I hate when you think you’re king,
Don’t care what you say.
You don’t think about others,
You don’t care what about me.
It’s always you, you, you,
You don’t see what I see.
Everyday of my life,
I deal with attitude,
Can’t you, for once,
Stop being so rude?
It’s all about you now.
Every time you get angry,
I’m the one to blame.
Why am I still here,
Still playing this game?
My head is spinning,
My heart is torn.
You make me wonder,
“Why was I born?”
Everyday of my life,
I deal with attitude,
Can’t you, for once,
Stop being so rude?
It’s all about you now.
I hate when life plays these tricks,
I’m tired of sitting on the line.
Torn between passion and hate,
What you say and what you whine.
You toyed with my love,
Yet I still can’t let you go.
I hate when you do this,
Causing me such woe.
Everyday of my life,
I deal with attitude,
Can’t you, for once,
Stop being so rude?
It’s all about you now.
It’s sort of like a song, with chorus and everything. Not bad, I guess.
Thx. I hope ppl like it.
Eh. Pretty good, IMO. I guess I would appreciate it more if I spent more time reading poems. But that’s me in a bottle. I have the attention span of a-
Ooooohhh pie!*skips off happily*
Perfect wording, yes sort of like a song. Great. ^_^
I LOVE IT ♥ Maybe i’ll make up a tune for it and start singing it. >.>
I don’t know, i’m that kind of person ^^
It’s wonderful ♥
xx xBLiNG ♫
Edit
I made up a tune for like the first verse already, except my singing sucks so if some like famous celeb sung it, it’ll sound better >.>
wow, thanks people. I never knew my poem/song would be so good ><