Since the other parts were boring I’m going to make this one interesting. xD
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My blonde hair ruffled a little under my brown hunter hat. I was on the ship to Orbis. Breathing in fresh air from the moving ship, I felt relaxed. But then, I remembered about the Balrogs and quickly consealed myself in the stuffy cabin.
I sat down on a stack of hay, thinking of the ship ride and the angelic city waiting for me just a few miles ahead.
When I got off the ship, I was very relieved. Finally, some fresh air. I looked around, and walked a little. I headed over to Orbis Tower, hoping to successfully kill some Jr. Sentinels. As I entered the first portal into the tower, I was aware of a presence watching me. I didn’t know what to do, so I just killed some Jr. Sentinels until I got very, very bored.
“What IS there to do anymore?” I sighed, talking to no one in particular.
I didn’t expect a voice to answer me.
“Yes, I know, what IS there to do anymore?”
I spun around, very shocked at what I was hearing. I thought I was alone. But like always, I thought wrong.
A man in a dark cloak was stading right behind me.
“Who are you?” I asked, getting my Battle Bow ready.
“No need to attack, I’m your friend.” said the man.
“You dress funny.” I realized how dumb I must’ve sounded.
“Ha ha.” The man laughed a little. He seemed nice…
“What do you want?” I asked.
“I want you to join me.”
“Huh?”
“You see, let me explain myself.” the dark cloaked man cleared his throat. “I’m part of a group called ‘Lost Passion.'”
“And…?”
“I want you to join me…You’re one of the ones I’m looking for. Someone who lost their heart in playing this silly game…”
“Game?”
“Yes, the aim of my group is to destroy the current leaders of Maple, and revive it to a newer, better world.”
“Just what is that, though? Some dark force???” I asked, my breath coming in gasps. This man didn’t seem too sane, if he wanted to overrule Maple!
“You’ll see.” He extended his hand.
I moved a little closer. Maybe this man would help me become a better person…I thought. Just before I took his hand, an arrow shot through it.
“OUCH!” I yelled.
“Sorry, I was aiming for him.” A mischievious voice called out of nowhere.
It was that Hunter that saved me from the Sin the other day!
“What does a jerk like you want?” I asked vicously, pulling out the arrow. My hand bled out.
“Woah, woah there, little girl.” The Hunter said. “I came to save you! So I followed you, and…”
“You stalker!!!” I whacked him with my bow out of stupidity.
“Hey!!! Stop that! Do you know what you would’ve gotten yourself into if you took his hand?”
“No, but it seemed interesting,” I admitted.
“No way! Don’t trust him!!!”
The man suddenly decided to pipe in. “Join me if you wish, it’s your choice. But remember…if you side with him, you’ll be my enemy, and I kill my enemies.” “Tomorrow is the day you make your decision, and tell it to me.” He disappeared.
I had no idea what to do, like always. I just glared at the Stalker Hunter.
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I hope the story is much more interesting now. xD Tell me what you think, please.
Since the other parts were boring I’m going to make this one interesting. XD
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My blonde hair ruffled a little under my brown hunter hat. I was on the ship to Orbis. Breathing in fresh air from the moving ship, I felt relaxed. But then, I remembered about the Balrogs and quickly concealed myself in the stuffy cabin.
I sat down on a stack of hay, thinking of the ship ride and the angelic city waiting for me just a few miles ahead.
When I got off the ship, I was very relieved. Finally, some fresh air. I looked around, and walked a little. I headed over to Orbis Tower, hoping to successfully kill some Jr. Sentinels. As I entered the first portal into the tower, I was aware of a presence watching me. I didn’t know what to do, so I just killed some Jr. Sentinels until I got very, very bored.
“What IS there to do anymore?” I sighed, talking to no one in particular.
I didn’t expect a voice to answer me.
“Yes, I know, what IS there to do anymore?”
I spun around, very shocked at what I was hearing. I thought I was alone. But like always, I thought wrong.
A man in a dark cloak was standing right behind me.
“Who are you?” I asked, getting my Battle Bow ready.
“No need to attack, I’m your friend.” said the man.
“You dress funny.” I realized how dumb I must’ve sounded.
“Ha ha.” The man laughed a little. He seemed nice,
“What do you want?” I asked.
“I want you to join me.”
“Huh?”
“You see, let me explain myself.” the dark cloaked man cleared his throat. “I’m part of a group called ‘Lost Passion.'”
“And, ?”
“I want you to join me, You’re one of the ones I’m looking for. Someone who lost their heart in playing this silly game, “
“Game?”
“Yes, the aim of my group is to destroy the current leaders of Maple, and revive it to a newer, better world.”
“Just what is that, though? Some dark force?” I asked, my breath coming in gasps. This man didn’t seem too sane, if he wanted to overrule Maple!
“You’ll see.” He extended his hand.
I moved a little closer. Maybe this man would help me become a better person, I thought. Just before I took his hand, an arrow shot through it.
“OUCH!” I yelled.
“Sorry, I was aiming for him.” A mischievous voice called out of nowhere.
It was that Hunter that saved me from the Sin the other day!
“What does a jerk like you want?” I asked viciously, pulling out the arrow. My hand bled out.
“Whoa, whoa there, little girl.” The Hunter said. “I came to save you! So I followed you, and, “
“You stalker!” I whacked him with my bow out of stupidity.
“Hey! Stop that! Do you know what you would’ve gotten yourself into if you took his hand?”
“No, but it seemed interesting,” I admitted.
“No way! Don’t trust him!”
The man suddenly decided to pipe in. “Join me if you wish, it’s your choice. But remember, if you side with him, you’ll be my enemy, and I kill my enemies.” “Tomorrow is the day you make your decision, and tell it to me.” He disappeared.
I had no idea what to do, like always. I just glared at the Stalker Hunter.
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I hope the story is much more interesting now. XD Tell me what you think, please.
That’s the edited version after I saw all the mistakes. >.<
You do know you can edit blog, right? And edit post?
ya, but it said it wouldn’t let me. sry. >.<
Keep writin scamps