My cheezy poem

I bet every1 is gonna flame me but w/e

A puppy Dances around
In His lonely Room
Here coems renome, yay wooooohooo!
its a haiku 😀
K here uhhh a Poem ma randomly think up of

A Rainbow with out color
Is like a baby wihtout a mother
Without love to care
knowone is there
Surviving alone
From a place it was thrown

the Raindow is gray
Searches for color
It meet with the baby
An becimes his mother
The aby grows up
Give joy to the rainbow
The joy then becomes
Colors that glow

With all Her colors
and the babys Joy
Both Live on
to enjoy
life at its fullest,
life at its best
never just leave,
without a rest

Im sure ppl will flame since every1 hate me but w/e

8 thoughts on “My cheezy poem”

  1. lol, Theres a lot of spelling errers but forget that.
    I relly like that poem.
    I mad one to. Just click my name to the left and look for:
    The truth of the world.
    THANKS!

  2. Yah what he said click my name also read Outcast of Elinnia Prologue and the ch.1,ch.2

  3. ? I was bored so it came popping up to my head, i wonder wha tit would b like if i wrote a poem i thougth about and took time writing O_O

  4. I like the poem. XD except the spelling errors.

    Let me try to link this to Maplestory.

    Hm. . .

    The baby is like a newcomer in Maplestory, A begginer in Victoria.
    His strength is 4. So he is pretty defenceless and wants to give up about becoming a powerful Wiz.
    Then came along his Rainbow, a lvl 15 “pro”
    This Rainbow cared for him and trained him.
    In the end, the baby grew stronger and the rainbow guy grew more mature.
    It’s a win-win situation.

    That is how it is related to an MMORPG. If you think metaphorically. XD

  5. loved it lol
    Overall 8/10 write more!
    dont worry i dont think anyone can get a 9/10 from me

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