Ok this is my FIRST attmempt at a story so be honest what you think.
I dont claim to be some great writer but after reading devilrymage’s stories i wanted to try. =)

“Ah I’ve finally done it” exclaimed Chris a lvl 10 beginner fresh off the boat to Lith Harbor.
Im on the famous VICTORIA ISLAND WOOHOO.

After all people were so nice to him before so what could go wrong?

[2 minutes later]

OMG I GOT CALLED NOOB 5 TIMES what!!!!
I guess people arnt as nice here as on Maple Island
HEY SHANKS CAN I GO BACK PLEAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEE

“No” Shanks said simply before lift off to head back to Maple Island

Well find then i guess ill just have to do this the hard way, no help and plain old fashion hard work Chris thought to himself.

So he headed off to Perion to become a warrior.

“Hmm you have the look of a warrior about you” Blackbull stated as he was sizing up chris
“Ok then you are now a warrior, I will help you along this path, i dont know everything PER SE but you can come to me” And remember to come back when you feel you have grown stronger

So after a trip to the weapon shop Chris was starting to feel good about himself.

So he headed off to kill a few stumps

KS,KS,KS,KS,KS,KS,KS

Poor chris couldnt get anything done like this.
He was too low lvl to be training well because higher lvls and noobs alike ksed here.

Then a giant blue lion leaped from the left of him and killed everything in his path.
The fierce warrior continued to walk but had Chris intruiged so he decided to follow the Crusader.

He didnt get far before the Crusader noticed but he just kept walking anyone figuring the small noob would get tired eventually.

After reaching Sleepywood the Crusader Rowen was QUITE annoyed but just continued walking.

Chris followed him vigilantly until he died at a Zombie Mushroom.

“HEY WAIT UP” cried Chris

“Me?” Rowen asked

YEA YOU

Why should i wait for you?

Because I like you and your strong, people on this island are mean and KS everywhere.

Thats what you get for picking to be a warrior kid, its tough and doesnt reap any rewards for a long time.

WELL I WANT TO BE STRONGER

Hmm ok kid sure,I’ll do it, besides i havnt talked to or helped a noob in a long time. I’m Rowen.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN NOOB

Haha young and spunky wow thats a lot of talk for a weakling.
Go train and the Slime Tree in Ellinia ill check up on you then.

Ok thanks rowen *buddys rowen*

Meanwhile rowens freind was waiting in the shadows the whole time.
His name was Kryne and he was a theif, notorious in Ludibrium.

“Why do you chose to hang out with such pathetic weaklings Rowen?”
Hes nowhere NEAR out power and it benefits you none.

Well lets just say i had a guy help me out when i was young.

HA what a waste of breath well see if he turns out strong enough to pass blackbulls second test.
Now lets go Hunt Some Jr Rog shall we?

Sure first to 10 kills wins.
Oh and Kryne, No Meso Explosion.

Hmm this may not be the best story but if its an ok start I’ll try to build on it and make it better.