Ok guys first time at writing one of these things =P
Never Again Ch:1
A shared story between Hinata19 and Rakutso
Never again will I love Never Again…
To think it was just 3 years ago that that incedent happened.
~Flashback~
I felt a brim of sunlight hit my face. Another perfect day I thought. My mom was just coming up the stairs to get me
up. Another great day at school I thought even though i’m a lowly level 7. She knocked on the door, I said Come in mom. She
replyed with an a ok. This morning was different though, She came in with a box. A box I have never seen before. I wondered
could it be my fathers? I had never met my father as he had ran away from me at such a young age. My mom would always tell me
what a great fighter he was. But one day he just disappeared never to be seen again. As my mom walked over to me. She
handed me the box. She told me to open it.As I opened the box. . .
Eh thats i’m gonna write for now =P To Be Continued =]
Hinata will be writing the 2nd one but they will all be posted threw my name =P But give her credit to <3 Ill be writing the odd numbers she be writing evens <3
4 thoughts on “Never Again Ch.1”
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Gahh I’m sooo lazy. I wrote like 3 sentences of Chp. 2 then I went to watch DDR and raving vids on youtube XD lmao.
needs to be longer!
There are small grammar errors here and there and irregular spacing (you typed this on Notepad, didn’t you?). Also, add more detail! =D I wanna see HOW he opened the box, HOW he woke up, et cetera :3
Plus, I wouldn’t mind length as well :3
The idea seems a bit cliche, but I’ve barely read anything, so I’ll wait patiently and see.
Good luck, keep writing.
Some shouldn’t bother posting chapters if they’re not prepared, eh Kutso? You didn’t seperates notes from the story, the speech was crammed in with the description, and it lacked anything. Do I sense phail? I believe I do.
~Sono