The hills are alive with the sound of..

CRAP!

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so far this year is TORTUREEE D: evil teachers, boring class, etc.

andandand, SO MUCH HOMEWORK~ .___.

-scratches head-

I logged into MS today for the first time since school started.

I was greeted with a “HIIII ALICEE@@@” but to find that a few close buddies deleted me XD oh well, inactiveness has it’s consequences.

I NEED MORE MAPLE TO FEED MY HUNGRY SOULLL. @_____@ Trying to stay on top of school, friends, piano, dance and everything else, I just don’t have the time anymore D:

Okay, that was short. I can’t remember why I started writing this in the first place

PS: INEEDHELPPPP. I’m writing some stuff for LA, and it’s hard introducing my characters. I make it sound so bleh like:

My name is ______. I am __ years old and I have blah blah blah. BORING!

My teachers think so too e____o; In fact, if she read this now she’d be like “NO, ALICE, NO! RUN ON SENTENCES ARE BAD! BADBADBAD~!!”

Since there’s tons of talented writers here, I just wanna ask :/ Any tips?

Hmm, I’m going to go sleep now. I’m pooped. I’ll check this in the morning when I get up XD

‘Night everybody~

6 thoughts on “The hills are alive with the sound of..”

Id suggest thinking the thing as not what it is, but as a story. A story that invovles introducing yourself to your teacher and stuff like that. Just like an introductory blog.

Except without the MMO stuff.

So basically you’re writing a paper introducing yourself?
Start off with the basics like this:
I was born __ years ago. I grew up in _____. As life moved on I went ______. (something like that)
explain about your past.
then move onto current stuff like hobbies and more about yourself now!
Then I would talk about your future goals or expectations

Yeah, I hope my advice counts as advice, I’m only in kindergarten so I don’t knows lots of stuffs, I’m still learning to draw inside the lines!

~LaZzz. . .

I was born of humble beginnings like most; I was manifested out of thin air by the Devil, and placed into a dark region under the Earth to undergo training for a Mortal Kombat tournament.

That’s usually how I start my introductory stuff. CLASS OF 2010 RULES!