Maple Adventures Chapter1

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Nothing in the mist……………. Abigail started walking in the woods by herself.
She cautiously stood still in the middle of nowhere.She saw a strange shawdow right in front her,
it was trying to say something.When the strange shawdow came out of the mist she knew a ice mage
was right there standing.”Please help me……..” said the ice mage.”I am out of potions…..watch ou…..” she fell.
there was a huge shadow.It was Mushmom. TO BE CONTINUED

3 thoughts on “Maple Adventures Chapter1”

  2. Too short. Flesh out the chars a bit more, add a truckload of description and emotion and this will look decent.

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