Well here is part 5
Running my heart out i reached the boat. Then i starred while Traus was kissing Shiny. Not very surprised I interrupted them rudely. “Guys we need to get her to a hospital FAST!.” Traus looked up. Shocked to see with Cindy in my arms. “Hell yeah.” He said as he jumped into the boat. The boat trip was silent until shiny broke it. “What happened?” I started telling about her dream and when i was done she looked up. Maby its from that mysterious mail you last had. We didn’t say a word as we landed on Victoria.
We ran towards the hospital in Lith Harbor. Not knowing how long Cindy would take this kind of heat. The shop owner looked with big eyes then said. “She in bad shape you may use the bed behind the store.” We laid her down al hoping that she would get beter. I looked outside. The beauty of the sun was now gone into dark clouds as it started to rain. The shop owner rushed in and told us to leave as he was going to heal her. I wanted to be with her but for now i had to go. I left my buddy communicator with her in case she woke up and called me.
Days were really hard. Coolie zombies looked way harder now or i just got weaker. Because i hadn’t seen anyone the past 3 hours i just shot at anything that looked like a zombie. “Hey watch it.” A girl walked towards me holding a arrow in her hand. I blushed a bit not knowing how to get myself out of this. “He sorry i thought you where a zombie.” A smile appeared on her face as she left the field. Then something really weird started to happen. The last moment i was worried about Cindy. And now my feeling of her were fadding. The girl i just bumped in seemed to have a great inpact on my live. Her pretty smile was now al over my head. “WHY.” all zombies started in fear as i screamed as hard as i could. I didn’t want to lose Cindy. But my mind was now battling itself i heard whispers inside.
“Just dump Cindy that girl over there is way prettier.” “No its not fair versus her and beside i still feel things for her.” “But those feeling are fadding right now get your ass up and tell that girl you like her!” I was standing there still being attacked by zombies i passed out again.
(if you read part 3 you will know where i am now.)
There i was. I that strange place with high mountains and a endless line of trees. I walked the same path as before i knew what was coming. First the river that was drying out though a hole. Then a shout from behind and then i would be back where a fainted. I ran towards the river. Still looking the same i pulled out some arrows and said. “Arrow Bomb.” A arrow was shot into the water. But i did not explode as i planned. It filled the hole where water was draining out from. Then i turned around to for the shout. And i heard it again. “Neo.”
Instead of waking up at Cindy’s home. I looked into a small cabin it was cold. Shaking a bit i looked around. I saw swords lying everywhere. Then that same beautiful girl i saw last day walked in. “You fainted because you weren’t paying attention.” Then i felt a empty hole inside me. Something was missing something that had to be filled but with what? “You want a drink?” “Yes.” I said there quietly. I didn’t remember anything that had happened to me. “So what where you thinking about what kept you so busy.” short silence as i shy lie said “You.” i blushed a bit knowing that it wasn’t a good time to say it. She frowned then walked outside the door and said. “think al you want am going to hunt for my Sparta you just heal.” A female warrior never seen those before. Not to mention she lived here al by herself. I felt the space in me get filled up quite a bit.
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Cindy’s VIEW
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Blue light was shining down at me. I looked up i felt pain everywhere. Then i saw the buddy communicator i picked it up. It was from Neo. I quickly sended a message. The reply didn’t came. I then tried find button. Neo is currently in Sharp Cliff 1 safety zone. Odd i thought he would be here to support me. As the shopkeeper came in he grimed. A evil smile appeared on his face as he said. “Aah yes my master wants to see you… IN HEL.” Within a split second he threw a Tobi at my head. I dodged picked up my Arc staff. “Fire Arrow.” I shouted as a magical field surrounded me. The arrow went straight through him. But he still smiled and kept on throwing. I ran for my live as i broke the window i jumped out. But i didn’t know i was on the second floor. A hard hit was feld. But knowing this creep would come and kill me made me run faster. After running al the way to Henersys i was exhausted. I felt something weird. Something was missing inside me. Something very important.
I Think from now on I will be talking from both views It will be highlited when i talk thourgh Cindy.
if you like plz rate 1 out of 10 i wanna know if am a bit good at is (Tip my gamma is a bit worse)
9/10. spelling errors but who cares about those? heck 10/10
Hey, your blogs are actually pretty cool! Just work on the grammar a bit.
And for switching between character views, try to stay in third person.
Otherwise, it’s awesome ^^ i give 8/10.
just keap reading part 6 and 7 i got the hole story in my mind already. I know how it ends XD