Okey i know my gamma and spelling aren’t the best atm but am trying to learn how other guys make there blogs there ideas and types of writing inspire me. As for my story il just write for myself but votes or comments are always welcome.

I felt something as a opened my eyes. “Hey your awake.” I saw she was sitting next to me on her bed. “Am just hell tired okey?” I lifted my head and sat right up i still saw the boy sleeping on his chair next to me, Deadly silence the only thing you could hear was Tick… Tock… Tick… Tock… Then she said “Tnx for saving my live i.” As i cut her of “Dont feel sorry i did it with pleasure.” Then i saw the boy opening his eyes again. “Ow god shiny your awake.” As he gave her a long hug and kissed her on her cheek she said. “This is my boyfriend Kane.” Then i said “Shiny can you now tell me where i might find Cindy?” The boy looked up as he scratched his head. “You can try Cloud park.” As sone as i heard what he said i said goodbye and ran towards the tower. My heart was beating like never before as i ran up the tower with al hoop in mind. Shes alive i just felt it. I killed some Jr Pepe on the way and then Ploop “Wow a vaulter 2000.” I continued upwards as i saw more people coming down. Then a stranger said “Neo?” As i looked up i saw Traus beated up face infront of me struggling to keep on his feet. “Wow i didn’t expect you here.” “When you cut down our communicator i thought something bad happend so i looked where you were the next day and i saw Orbis on my screen.” Its a long story.

As we walked upwards i told him everything. My heart slowed down and my mind got calm again. “Wow i didn’t know you felt that way.” We walked further up not saying anything to eachother As i peaked my head above the tower i saw a horrible site on i would never forget it was far worse then when i left. Then Traus said “Am going to help people you just find her.” He pointed at the large gate witch said “Cloud Park.”

Cloud park was really a mess. The monsters where gone houses destroyed body’s lying aL over the place. I hoped with al my heart that Cindy wasn’t lying between them. My search continued as i came at nependeaths. Large pieces of the tower where lying here with people and monsters trapped under it. But there was nothing i could do these pieces where to big to heavy and to strong to be lifted. And destroying them (if it was possible) would hurt them even more. Then i reached a cloud with a pound in it. It looked strange cause i was thinking that this was the way a cloud was raining. I washed my hair and ate an apple and then continued. This place really owned its name. You weere just walking in clouds. Then i saw a shadow something was standing a couple of clouds further.

I kept jumping hoping it would be her. Hoping that everthing was going to be alright. My heart was now out of control as i saw the shade get bigger and bigger. Then i stared it horror. It was indeed Cindy standing there but she was not alone. A big strong bandit was kissing her as if he mend it. My world fell apart my nearly exploded and my head could not take this anymore. I fainted hearing a soft sound of the wind meaning i was falling down.

To Be Continued