Be sure to read intro if you haven’t done that yet
As rain started to fall i looked in to her eyes and said “So you know where she is?” She looked down to her feat and whisperd “Not really i haven’t seen her in the past few days.” “then how did you get my name?” “She tells about you every day.” A long silence came as a thought for myself. She missed you that means she still likes you.
“What did she say then.” “Ooh i dunno about how sweet you are and how you live i was getting sick of it by then.”
“Whats the last time you saw her?” “I guess that would be when she said she was going to hunt Jr sentinails.”
By now it was raining heavy as i said goodbye and ran to the inn. I opened the door. It was cold 2 candles flickered in the sunlight as people tried to warm them selfs. The walls where cold as a walked pass them. Again i had the feeling something bad would happen. I sat down a bench and looked around. Just a few people here. Suddenly the ground started shaking as a looked outside the window. I could not believe my eyes. I shouted “RUN”
It was a horrible sight the Orbis tower that had stood for ages was falling towards us. I had no time to think i ran away as i heard a large bang i shockwave went though al of Orbis i fell on the ground knocked unconscious.
When i woke up i was lying in a bed. The house was familiar i thought what i could be then i knew it. It was Cindy’s house but why was i suddenly in Henersys was she here or did she left. Thoughts rushed to my body as i felt sadness anger hope and despair al in one. I tried to got up but a sharp pain stopped me from doing so. my legs were hurt so i wasn’t going anywhere. Then i suddenly fainted again
As i woke up i felt the cold walls of Orbis again. “It was just a dream.” i looked around. Orbis was completely destroyed nothing was standing body where lying everywhere. I walked towards the tower i gained al my strength and walked down. There i found Shinys body. heavily wounded i ran towards her “Are you alive?”i started looking for live signs. Then she grown “tell my sis i love her” then she pasted out. I knew by then she would no make it alive but i had no choose i lifted her up and continued to walk downwards. Into the darkness.
It was a long walk i did not have any clue how long i walked but it sure felt long. The walls getting colder and the light above fainted as i struggled to keep her out of danger from the leattys. Then i heard a faint scream.
“Shiny!” A boy showed up running upwards. “Shes in bad shape we have to get her to hospital sone.” “Il carry her further downwards” we ran the longs out of are ribs as we saw the big doors of el nath approaching. While i hooled of the Jr Pepe’s the boy ran further. We finally found ourselves in el nath as we ran towards the nearest hospital
There she lay unconscious as the boy cried. “I am sorry i wasn’t there to protect you” he turned to me looking in my eyes “thank you for saving her a part of me would have died if i found her dead.” We sat there a long silence surpassed us as we prayed that she would make it. I then fell asleep i was tired i had no energy left in my body.
Its shorter then Intro but i have a exam week coming so i have to study T,T
Its great, just please try to edit out the mistakes,
yeah i know am using a gamma checker now every time i type this its just the spelling i guess