hey this is my first like series so if it sucks dont blame me

once in Maple island there lived a young boy named ryu. Ryu was new to victoria island he came to become a magicion. Exitedly he travelled to ellina on foot because of the lack of mesos he had. climbing every ladder over every slope killing every snail ,slime or tree stump to get in his way.Finally entering the last portal, exusted he finally enterd the town . He droped hard to the ground as he felt the moist leaves on his flesh the last glance he saw was some warrior walking by. Suddenly his eyes open widely as he awakens in the potion shop. ”I see you had quite a fall there”. Said some young girl.It wasnt that she was the most prettiest girls he ever saw bit when he looked into her eyes there was just something about her that made her diffrent from everyone else . He just sat there unable to say anything. ”Here i got a few extra potions take ’em”. He reached out his hand and she handed him the potion. He gulped down the potion to the last drop.He was able to talk again but he just stood there, silently waiting for the girl to go on. ”Well i see your feeling better..im amy, im a mage too lvl 56.. do you need any help with anything?”. Ryu slowly thought ofwhat to say and opened his mouth ”Well im ryu and i wanted to see Grendal the really old.. i wanted to become a Magicion. ”Well then we should be on our way”. As they walked and climbed there way to the top of ellina hand by hand they finally reached the top to the library. ”Well here we are go on in”. As Ryu entered the door and talked to Grendal a light flashed and thus he became a magicion. Stepping out of the door ”Now what the heck am i suppose to do?”. ”Well now to the armour shop” said amy.
To be continued…..