What are you doing here?! Shouted Aaron as he walked into the kitchen where we were eating breakfast.
I live here, remember? I replied without even turning to him.
Lily, youre not really going to let this Hacker live here, are you? he asked wildly.
Michael doesnt really have anywhere else to go. Lily said trying to calm him down.
Hes a Hacker! Theyre all bad! Aaron argued.
Hey. If you got a problem with me lets take it outside. I said getting up from the table. Ly please bring my stuff. Ly brought my Deadly Fin, Korean Fan, and Seclusion Wrist-guard from my room. I slipped my Korean Fan into its sheath which was tied around my arm near my shoulder. I put on my Seclusion Wrist-guard and grabbed my Deadly Fin. Aaron slipped on his Sapphire Gigantic and we both walked outside. Ly and Lily came out, too.
This is so stupid. You guys act like immature kids. Lily complained.
Thisll be over soon. I said.
First drop of blood wins? Aaron asked.
Fine. I agreed.
Then we started. Aaron started off with Shadow Partner. He started to use Lucky 7 but I deflected them with Savage Blow. Aarons attacks were still strong but I felt as if they had slowed down. Or maybe I got faster. As the fight continued neither of us got a hit.
He jumped into the air and used Avenger. Two giant stars flung at me I grabbed some Mesos and threw them into the air. Instantly a golden shield appeared in front of me as I used Meso Guard. The stars bounced away as they collided with the shield. I grabbed some more Mesos and threw them at the ground using Meso Explosion. Dust clouds rose around me, concealing me in their shadows.
I quickly used Dark Sight and slowly walked out of the dust cloud. I saw Aaron peer straight into the cloud. This was my chance. I released Dark Sight and jumped onto him. He tried to struggle but couldnt attack me at this angle. He skillfully dodged all my attacks. This isnt working! Every single one of my attacks hadnt done anything.
I thought about this as I kept slashing at him. Wait! Thatll work! I quickly put my plan into action as I kept attacking.
Get away! Aaron shouted as he used Shadow Web. I jumped back as I dodged the sticky trap.
Aaron, give up. I win. I declared.
I guess Hackers arent that very smart! he shouted as grabbed a couple stars. He made to throw them at me but dropped them. He shouted in pain. He had just exploded. He hadnt really exploded like blast apart but his clothes were torn and blood was dripping. I had won.
How? he mouthed as he fell on his back.
I just hid some Mesos in your clothes when you were too busy dodging and then I just used Meso Explosion. I explained. I dug my Deadly Fin into the ground and leaned against it. This battle had worn me out a lot. If I hadnt been a Cleric before I wouldnt have been able to use so much energy.
I walked over to Aaron and started to Heal him. I was glad I could still use my Cleric skills. He soon regained consciousness. I extended a hand to help him up. He just slapped it away. I sighed.
I felt something slash my side. Blood splashed out. I fell to my knees as I started to Heal my side.
You dont seem that strong. A voice sneered. On a branch of the tree outside Lilys house a Spearman with a Serpents Tongue was sitting down.
Who are you? I asked grabbing my Deadly Fin after I had finished healing.
Luke said youre supposed to be strong, but youre just a weakling. He said. Luke?!
Wheres Jane?! I shouted.
Beat me and Ill tell you. He said grabbing his Serpents Tongue.
I grabbed some Mesos and threw them at him. The Mesos blew up the tree but he wasnt anywhere to be found. I looked around everywhere.
Looking for me? he asked. I turned to find him right behind me. He slashed my chest and I was thrown backwards. I quickly got up and used Assaulter but he was already gone.
You wont catch me with that speed. He said. If you havent noticed Im a hacker with the power of speed. You wont even be able to hit me. He disappeared again. Crap!
Ly! I shouted as I heard him scream. His back was opened up and blood was pouring. He fell to the ground and didnt move. I ran to him but felt the Hackers spear slash my arm. I hurriedly tried to find him, but there was nothing, not even a blur.
Michael! Lily yelled.
Stay where you are or she dies. The Hacker said holding his spear to her neck. I tried to run forward but he inched his spear to her neck and I froze in my tracks.
Get off her! Aarons voice boomed. Stars rained upon the Hacker. He let go of Lily and disappeared again.
Lily, are you ok? I asked as I rushed to her. But I stopped when I heard Aaron scream. The Hacker had his spear stuck into Aarons chest. The Hacker started to move the spear around as blood streamed out. Aarons hands started to move forward and they grabbed the Hackers arm. The Hacker tried to shake him off but it didnt work.
Michael! Now! Aaron shouted. I used Hate and rushed forward. The Hacker managed to shove Aaron away but it was too late. I used Savage blow on his arms and legs to immobilize him.
Now wheres Jane? I hissed bringing my dagger to his face. I heard someone clapping behind me. I saw it was Luke.
Excellent. You defeated him faster then I thought you wouldve. Luke said.
Master! The Hacker called out.
I have no need for you now that I know Zeros new strength. Luke said menacingly. Michael now finished him off!
Luke! I shouted. I started to run towards Luke. I saw him raise his blade and slash the air in front of him. A screamed pierced the air. I turned to see a slash mark on the Hackers body. He started to twitch as he screamed out in pain.
Youre really annoying. Luke said as he stabbed the air. The Hacker grew silent with one last scream.
You How could you do that? He was youre comrade! I shouted. Although he was my enemy how could Luke do such a thing?
Comrade? Luke started to laugh. He was just a tool and nothing more. I used him, he broke, so I had no more need of him.
Is that what Jane is to you also? I asked. A tool?!
Shes more useful then the dead guy behind you but yes. She is a tool. Luke said.
ILL KILL YOU! I shouted. I Teleported behind him and brought my Deadly Fin forward. Luke turned just in time to guard my attack, but I wasnt finished yet. With my free hand I reached for my Korean Fan and used Pickpocket. I jumped away as Mesos started to form around Luke.
DIE! I screamed as I used Meso Explosion. The whole area around him disappeared in the explosion. Smoke filled the air. I stared into the smoke looking for him.
I saw the tip of his Blue Screamer lunge out of the smoke. I jumped back but his Hacker powers still hit me. I hit away his sword with my dagger and used Band of Thieves. Six Bandit Guardians appeared around him and stared to attack him. But he quickly slashed the air using Slash Blast and they all disappeared in a puff of smoke as they were struck.
His used Coma and slashed open the arm I was holding the Deadly Fin with. I dropped the dagger. I tried to move but couldnt. He placed his blade near my face. He stared at me and pulled his blade back. He grabbed my Deadly Fin and hurled it into the air. He used Shout on it. It shattered. The pieces lodged into the ground.
I wont kill you. Youll make a good puppet for Dot. He said. Now for the GM. He turned and started to walk towards Lily. Lily tried to raise her Kage against him but he kicked it away. He raised his sword ready to strike.
Stop! I shouted. I broke free of the paralysis and whipped out my Korean Fan. I rushed forward and slashed at Luke. Our weapons clashed.
How ? he breathed. I was shocked, too. My Korean Fan become a Dragons Tail. I took the chance of Luke being distracted and knocked his sword away. He kept a grip on it but I kept slashed at him. Every blow was blocked by him but I kept pushing him back. He was about to use Shout but I Teleported away.
Youre too much trouble. Ill just kill you! He shouted. He slashed at the air. I immediately used Meso Guard but it still hit me. I was knocked back onto the ground. I got up.
Youre not the only Hacker here! I shouted. I raised my left hand and used vac. Dust and scattered leaves started to fly towards my hand. They all stopped in front of my palm and lay there suspended. Luke started to slide closer to me. I saw his grip on his Blue Screamer started to loosen. Without his blade he cant use his ceasx. I saw a smile. I ignored it as a blur and strengthened my power. He was fighting against the force of my vac but it kept drawing him nearer.
He slipped and started to fly towards me. As he came closer he faced me.
You lose! he shouted. He stabbed his blade into my hand. He then pulled out a syringe full of Ban and shot it into my arm. My vac stopped working as he pulled the blade out. I pulled the syringe out and threw it at the floor.
Bans flowing in your viens.. Youre Hacker days are gone. Now die. He said raising his blade. I quickly slashed at him but he jumped away. He started to come at me again. I jumped forward and used Assaulter and managed to slash his arm open. He grabbed his bleeding arm.
Master! a voice shouted. It was a small girl.
Dot, I dont need help. Luke said.
Dont worry Master. Jane take him! Dot commanded. Jane flew towards Luke and helped him up. She avoided my eyes as she flew away.
Jane! I shouted after her. She just ignored me and flew on.
How dare you hurt Master! Dot shouted. She snapped her fingers. Suddenly hundreds of people started to surround us. They were all of different classes but they all had no weapons and there eyes were white.
Puppets attack! she shouted. The people started to run towards us. I raised my dagger in preparation to attack.
Wow! I get to watch the Legendary Zero kill innocent people! Dot shouted excitedly. Innocent people?
Michael! Dont kill them. Shes controlling them! Ive met her before. Shes a Hacker and she uses the power of hacked. It lets her control people if they write their name in her scroll! Lily shouted from behind me. Scroll? I stared at the girl and saw a giant scroll tied to her back.
I guess Ill just have to destroy her scroll! I aid confidently. I ran towards the crowd of people. They all grabbed at me but I pushed them all away.
Theres too many of them. I gasped as I Teleported back to Lily. Lily can you contain them?
Ill try. She grabbed her Kage and started to use Slow and Seal. It stopped the crowd a little bit. I Teleported to the roof of Lilys house. I put down my Dragons Tail which immediately transformed back into my Korean Fan when I let go of it. I used Holy Arrow and aimed at Dots scroll.
I closed one eye and aimed carefully. I didnt want to kill a little girl. After making sure it was the best aim I could get I released the arrow. The arrow flew over the heads of the crowd. The arrow came toward Dot. She raised her hands to brace the impact but it never came. The arrow had dissipated before it had reached her scroll.
I punched the tiles on the roof. If only I had a little more range.
Get up. A voice gasped behind me. It was Aaron. I can get you about one-thirds of a way closer but the aim and the shot is all you. You better not miss. You got one shot. I just stared at him.
Come on! Im about to lose consciousness here! He shouted. He grabbed the back of my shirt and started to use Flash Jump. It felt like flying with Jane. I pushed her out of my mind. I need complete concentration for this shot.
This is my limit. Good luck. Aaron whispered. He used one last Flash Jump and threw me a little higher. He flew towards the ground as was I. I quickly used Holy Arrow and took aim.
I wasnt 100% sure on the aim but if I didnt release it now I wouldnt be able to shoot again unless I fought through the crowd which was near impossible without killing them.
Please make it! I shouted as I released the arrow. It rocketed towards Dot. She shut her eyes but it didnt hit her. It struck the scroll on her back. It fell off her back and started to catch on fire. She tried to put it out but it was too late. The scroll turned to ashes. The crowd suddenly dropped to the ground.
I hit the ground. I looked at where Dot was but she was gone. My body was burning as I felt the over-use of my energy take its toll on me.
I breathed deeply as Lily came over to me.
Michael! she cried. She started to hug me.
Sorry but Im kind of tired. I whispered as she continued to hug me. I rested for a moment with her in my arms.
We dont have time for kisses. Come on you guys. We got things to do. Aaron said dragging himself to us. We both blushed and quickly got up.
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Hope you guys liked it. Comments/questions welcomed. Flame, too.
Thanks to the people that replied on my other blog about types of Hacks. I forgot most of them.
Well time to go play some online Go^^
-That Asian Kid-
Wow.
Simply put. Very simply.
Wow. It was awesome.
~~~~Pirkid~~~~
Was a bit too fast for me, but still good.
My favorite chapter already, keep writing more =)
Its also my favorite MMOTales story now xD
@epictales/pirkid: thnx =D
@aznricefan: what do u mean by 2 fast?
cool 2 BLOGS ON FRONT PAGE AT SAME TIME. XD
AWESOMENISSSSsSAjoisjAOISJHNai;hs
Oh. My. God.
How can you write suck a cool story? Are you a profesonal. If you edited it a little i could definatly see you making this a book. Out of 10 this get a 11, to the 1000000000000000000000th power.
A few mistakes written in here, just spelling, no grammar. ^-^ I’m loving this sotry more and more, But if this won’t give it away, can you tell me if a hacker gets “Ban” in them, wouldn’t that also erase the things they got while being a hacker? (Ex.: Michael got Chief Bandit/Bandit/Rogue skills) and what happens if you’re hacks are open tobe destroyed get destroyed? (Ex’s: If Michael’s hands got cut off, Dot’s scroll burning into ashes), Otherwise, This is my new favourite chapter and story here on MMOTALES! Keep it up! ^^
Regards,
Rob
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Regards,
Rob
-.~.-Ideas? Comments? Please PM me since I rarely reply to blogs/topics.-.~.-“
First for the “Ban”-thing.
I decided to not make it that way because poor Michael. Trained for 3 months and loses it allf rom one injection. And I don’t want to make another chapter on Michael getting new powers.
And for the hackers losing thier hacks when losing what opens them it won’t happen to michael. If that ever did happen to Michael he’ll be able to use vac sitll but not 100% of it like he can with his hands. And here’s a little Bio for Dot’s powers.
If she has someone’s name on paper in thier own handwriting she can control them. She’ll get a new scroll later.
And if you wnat to know why she escaped and didn’t die it’s because she plays a crucial role of why Jane is working for Luke.
Hint: it’s about Josh her little brother.
Regards,
Rob
-.~.-Ideas? Comments? Please PM me since I rarely reply to blogs/topics.-.~.-“
First for the “Ban”-thing.
I decided to not make it that way because poor Michael. Trained for 3 months and loses it allf rom one injection. And I don’t want to make another chapter on Michael getting new powers.
And for the hackers losing thier hacks when losing what opens them it won’t happen to michael. If that ever did happen to Michael he’ll be able to use vac sitll but not 100% of it like he can with his hands. And here’s a little Bio for Dot’s powers.
If she has someone’s name on paper in thier own handwriting she can control them. She’ll get a new scroll later.
And if you wnat to know why she escaped and didn’t die it’s because she plays a crucial role of why Jane is working for Luke.
Hint: it’s about Josh her little brother.”
Intresting. . .
I’m already jumping to conclusions ~_~
It was pretty good, but yeah, it was a bit too fast. Four fights in one chapter, sometimes it gets hard to keep up with what’s going on.
Pretty good overall though.
Pretty good overall though.”
Just read it slowly or re read parts you don’t understand. In the end, I believe I got pretty much everything without using much extra effort.
sorry everyone who says its a little fast. I’ll try not to squeeze so many things into 1 chapter
@aznricefan: what do u mean by 2 fast?
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I’d say you should slow it down a notch. Like Veggie stated, 4 fights in one chapter is too much. Sometimes you can get away with it especially if a lot is going on at once, but the thing about slowing it down is not to make the story more easily understood, but to give the fans just barely enough to keep wanting more and more. That way, you really get ’em hooked. o_o
Um. Things really went quite fast. And the way this is written isn’t encouraging me to go back and reread it to figure out. :X
Okay, maybe I’m just lazy.
Wow. I just realised this has a lot of fights.
Man, I am HOOKED.
XD Like what Rice said.