OMG it reached chapter 20!
I’m going to make chapter 20 longer then the rest, or at least I’lll try.
And thanks to everyone who has supported me!
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CHapter 20 Part1!

I couldn’t believe it! There on the floor admist all the chaos and confusion was an Asianc Bow. I ran toward it dodging the black bolts of lightning emmited(sp?) from the Balrog. I grabbed it from the ground and reached for an arrow.

I notched the arrow and aimed at one of the two Balrog. It his wing. He screamed in pain. He looked directly at me. It charged toward me. I started to run but he hit me with a black lightning. I fell to the ground smoking.

All my arrrows scattered across the deck. It slashed at me but it was stopped. Mark was standing in front of me holding up his Silver Legend Shield.

“Run!” he shouted as the Balrog shot a black sphere at him. It knocked away his shield. The Balrog slashed again. Mark blocked it with his REd Katan but the second Balrog shot a black sphere breaking couple of his ribs.

“Mark!” I shouted. One of his broken ribs had punctured a hole in his side. Blood gushed out as the Balrog continued to cause damage. He fell unconcious as I carried him to Dan and Helen.

“Watch over him.” I said running back toward the deck.

“David wait!” Dan called after me but I used Thrust and went faster.

“Hey!You morons look over here!” I shouted. The Balrogs looked toward me. I reached for an arrow but found that I had no arrows left. Crap! I had lost all my arrows when that Balrog attacked me earlier.

The Balrogs charged at me. I dodged thier slashes and used Power Knock-Back to keep them busy. One of the Balrogs shot a black sphere at me. It hit me in my stomach and crashed into the floor.

As the Balrogs landed on the deck and stomped toward me I saw Blitz running across the deck.

David!, he cried. He created an ice wall around me but the Balrogs knocked it down like it was made of toothpicks. One of the Balrogs grabbed him and brought him to his mouth. As Blitz struggled the Balrog dropped him, swallowing him whole.

“Blitz!” I shouted. “You b@stards! I’ll kill you!” I grabbed the Asianac Bow and let my anger loose.

A blue aura surrounded me. It sent shockwaves throughout the whole ship. I held the Asianac Bow up and an arrow of light appeared. I pulled it back and fired. OMG.I just used Soul Arrow! It hit one of the Balrogs in the chest. It roared in pain as his partner slashed at me. I quickly used Thrust barely dodging the attack and used Soul Arrow on him. It hit his wing.

Blood sprayed all over me as the Balrogs howled in pain. I fired couple more Soul Arrows at the Balrogs but they dodged them. They had started to retreat back to thier ship. I shot after them.

One of the Balrogs, who was really pissed off, fired one last Black Lightning attack. It hit the ship’s engine. The ship started to plummet(sp?) toward the ocean below.

Dan and Helen ran out with Makr between them grabbing thier shoulders for support. As the ocean came closer I saw a tower. It was Orbis Tower! If we made it that far we could still live.

The ship started to scratch the surface of the water. We weren’t going to make it. The tower was just too far away. Little ddi I know behind the ship where the engine was the Balrog’s lightning attack had burned a small piece of wood. It was burning still as it slid dangerously toward the gasoline tank of the engine.

The whole back of the ship exploded. A wall of fire was eating up the whole ship. Without thinking I rabbed Helen and Dan and threw them into the ocean. I grabbed Mark and tossed him as I jumped in. Underwater I could see the fire engulf the whole ship.

As I broke the surface the cold winds from El Nath hit me. I met the other’s and we all swam toward the shore. WE went into the tower to shelter from the cold. He all huddled together trying to keep warm. As we shivered I saw something out the window of the tower. I felt a fire burn within me even in this cold weather. What I saw was the Balrog ship. Also where Blizt was. He is alive! I kept repeating this to myself as I grabbed my new Asianac Bow.
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Hope you liked Part 1^_^
Well here comes Part2!
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“Blitz!” I yelled running toward the window. The others saw the ship and ran with me.

“You guys stay here.” I callked back as I jumped out the window landing on the Balrog ship.The ship jolted off back into the sky.

“I’ll come back. I promise!” I shouted. I could see Helen was crying. Dan shot the finger at me. I could tell he was mad for leaving him behind. But also wishing me luck. Mark just stood in the window frame looking directly at me. His eyes said everything. He wished me luck and that I came back safely. As the ship started to pick up speed Mark threw something at me. I cuaght it.

It was a barrel of steel arrows. I silently thanked him.

Now. Time to find Blitz. I went under deck to find huge hallways. I looked inside each room which were about the size of a house. Inside were store rooms of potions and stolen weapons and armors.

I kept exploring bein silent as I could. I didn’t find anything interesting until… I reached a huge room. Inside were about 5 Balrogs and couple hundred wild boars. The wild boasr were held in a pen as the Balrogs grabbed them and started to munch down.

I looked at each Balrog carefully until I found the one. It was the one with a chest wound. He was the one who had eaten Blitz. I quickly pulled back a steel arrow and fired. The Balrog fell to the ground, dead. In his skull was a steel arrow buried into his brain. The other Balrogs just jumped him and started to tear him apart eating every scrap of meat. Sick b@stards.

As the dead Balrog was fully consumed I saw a small body laying on the ground hiding behind the dead Balrog’s skull. It was Blitz! He was unconcious.

I used Thrust and ran out of the room. I couldn’t defeat them all alone. I would need to find soemthing to help me. I stopped in front of a potion room and looked inside. Along with healing potions I found a couple shelves full of poison, sleep droughts, paralysis leaves, and a couple bottles of black liquid. I wasn’t sure what it was but I bet it was sinister. I pocketed all the harmfull potions and drank some of the healing ones.

Feeling rejuvianted(sp?) I walked back to the room with the Balrogs. They were still muching down like starved dogs. Perfect. I grabbed a steel arrow and dipped the tip in a poison bottle. I fired the arrow into the mouth of the Balrogs. He didn’t even notice as he kept eating mroe and mroe wild boars. I fired couple more poisoned arrows into him.

As I used the last bottle of poison the Balrog fell to the floor, dead. Before the other Balrog’s ate the body I used Thrust and ran toward the body. It huge mouth lay open. I quickly threw in all the harmful potions.

I then ran to Blitz. The other Balrogs noticed me but decided to first eat thier companion. As they finsiehd him they advanced toward me. I used Thrust and grabbed Blitz and ran for my life. The Balrogs chased me to the top deck.

We were couple thousand feet above the ocean. As the Balrogs surrounded me I took the risk and jumped. The Balrogs using thier wings flew after me. As one of the Balrogs slashed at me he stopped in mid-attack. Yes! The harmful potions were taking effect. The Balrogs started to fall through the air dead.

They crashed into the ocean cuasing huge waves. I landed in the water holding Blitz close. I looked around. There wasn’t land anywhere. Now what? I kept floating around hoping everyoneelse was doing better then I was.