Victoria’s View…………………………………………………………………………………
I was born into the family of the archmages. My family was the head family in the town of Ellinia. I had never had a day in which I did not get what I had wanted. My parents had called me gifted ever since I had shot magic claws and had used fairy guard at the age of 3. Although I do not know if that is true or not. I have learned that in the school for elite mages. THat out of my age group of 5-10 I was the most gifted although I was the mere age of 4. I remember how every now and then a kid who was older then me and higher in level would come up to me and try to pick on me. THe biggest mistakes they ever made. For Although I may be young I already had mastered the arts of healing and fire arrow. As I laugh at the boys who run away crying. I started to wonder why is this town against Perion and Henesys. Although I never had gotten my answer I graduated from my school and had graduated even the military academy for elites by the time I was 13 in age.
Nyrok’s View…………………………………………………..
My mother who had me trained by only the best had eventually run out of masters to train me in the art of fletching and archery. She also had requested masters of perion to come down and teach me to master the tecniques of using a spear. But as soon as they arrived. Only by a meer week had I mastered handling a spear and every other weapon possible. I was now 13 and nearing the age in which I was destined to make my family proud. But I did not know what to do. I had no idea what to do….
This ones shorter, but its also pretty good ^_^
Yeah i agree ^_^
LONGER PLEASE
other then that great