There was a boy named Nyrok who had always envied his father who was the legendary Master Ranger of Henesys. He had always envied his father and had wished to meet his father one day. But he knew that it was not possible for his father died protecting Henesys from a village war between Henesys and Ellinia. This is where the story begins of a young archer destined to a forbidden love not accepted by anyone but his friends…..
The times were harsh as Perion and Henesys had allied while Kerning and Ellinia had allied. Although they were both very distant from each each other. Each village had become neighbors from a village on the other side of dungeon from them. While Henesys was deep at war with Ellinia. Peroin was busy with the assassination attempts by Kerning.
Nyrok’s View……………………………………………………………………………………………………….
I was just in the crossfire as I was born in the city of Henesys. In a royal family. The prophet had proposed that I was the breakthrough to the war. That when I reach the age of 14 I will slaughter the town of Ellinia, and eliminate the assasination attempts saught by Kerning and crown Henesys as capital of Victoria Island. As I remember ever since I was first able to walk I was trained by the finest trainers in Henesys to become a great bowman. TO become ilke my father. I don’t know if it was because I was a child but I had never thought deeply about war. My mother had always told me that I will bring fame and glory to our family. But as I did not wish to dissapoint my mother. I also did not have a strong will to kill anyone that had done nothing to me.
Hey this is really awesome, keep it up! ^_^
try to write more, =P
Great man. Really good. Altho you could have written longer and you spelled Perion wrong.
Lol im just picking out mistakes