This is my first story I hope I haven’t made too much grammar and spelling mistakes = [
Snow fell as I was walking down the deserted town. “Hey… It’s snowing.” I whispered to myself. Out of the blues, a message popped up from my communicator.
<Is the job done?>
<Yes, yes… The target is down.>
I feel tired from all the requests I’ve done today. So I decided to go find a hotel to rest for the night. I walked into this hotel named ‘Sunny Inn’. ‘Ah, what the hay… Any hotel would do for today.’ I quickly checked in and went inside the room. I changed into my sauna robe and went to sleepy soundly and peacefully.
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“Daddy, daddy! Look what I drew!” A little girl was running toward to this man. “That’s a very nice drawing dear.” The man complimented.
Suddenly, a gun was fired out of no where and blood was splattered everywhere.
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I woke up abruptly. “It’s only a dream.” I told myself. I looked over at the clock, it reads ‘4:00 am’. I looked at my communicator to see if there was any new request submitted by anyone. “Collecting herbs… Killing werewolves…” And then, my eye sight stopped on a single title. ‘Assassinate’. ‘Interesting…’ I thought. I opened the request letter and there was nothing but a contact name. ‘Firey’.
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Meh, all the good author that writes in this website inspired me, so I decided to write a story myself =]
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Hey! I’m new to the blogs. Your first chapter is great =D Keep up the good work XD
Great story, but try to make it longer.
Nice first chapter.
Wow that’s a good start. XD
LMAO I loved the skit I read it to my brother and we cracked up.
nice!