So this story is about my mage, Inapoi, a soon-to-be cleric. Eh, he’s lvl 18. Well it will start out in Maple Island, our young hero sleeping.
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Our young hero starts his adventure in Maple Island, in a town called Mushroom Town. In his grey t-shirt, blue shorts, and a sword in hand, Inapoi sets out to become a magician.
ZzzZzz..ZZZzzzzZZ
Inapoi: *yawn* Hmm man i wanna go back to sleep!!
Inapoi wakes up and starts his journey, waving goodbye to his parents and all his loved ones. So he goes out of town, waiting for the first monster.
Inapoi: A snail!
The snail looks at him, in a happy mood. All of a sudden, it rushes at him!
Inapoi hits the green snail, doing minimal damage each time. The green snail dissolves in its shell, as he felt stronger, lights coming out of him. He keeps on hitting these small snails, until he felt strong enough to become a magician.
Inapoi: Yes!! Finally! I get to go to Victoria!
Inapoi was now strong enough to get to Victoria Island. He rushes to SouthPerry, giving Shanks his ticket.
He went in the ship, seeing all the strong people on it. He was scared and shy, but was directed to his room. The moment he got in he saw a young girl, at Inapoi’s age.
Girl: Hi!! What’s your name?
Inapoi: I-It’s Inapoi!
Girl: Inapoi? That’s a funny name. Mine is Jaci.
Inapoi: Oh ok. Nice to meet you!! So I’ll be rooming with you for the trip?
Jaci: Yup! So I’m gonna be a magician, you?
Inapoi: Same here!!
So the two talked, getting to know each other a lot better.
HONK!!HONK!!
They finally arrived!!! Wait? What is THAT??!
A barlog! Lol just contuine its not bad
it’s actually not bad. i enjoyed reading it = ) you can read mine but it’s probably not as good =
Pretty good. I think you should add some more details and make the story longer.